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Jennifer789 · 发表于 2010-2-10 07:54:46

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on
her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating
them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix
Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinated them with her narratives and

这道题目看的不是很懂 OG上的解释也模糊 NN们帮我解释下吧~~

rianne · 发表于 2010-2-10 09:09:47

原话意思是
Beatrix Potter用其敏锐的观察力以及对nature的love，将书中的插图与自己的叙述巧妙地结合起来~
不选A，因为，1、Beatrix这个主语与谓语capitalized on……距离太远，2、carefully coordinating这个分句没有正确修饰先行词。3、认为是修饰BP的话，时态与capitalized on 的过去时态不搭，混乱~
不选B，carefully coordinating them with her narratives从语法上看是修饰illustrations的，但是，此动作应该是Beatrix做的，而非“插图”做的。
不选D，还是coordinate动作执行问题，是Beatrix做的。
E，此句各个part的关系混乱

smalldan · 发表于 2010-2-10 09:32:52

试着解释一下
(A)主语Beatrix Potter 与谓语capitalized中间加了2个插入语，choppy
(B)介词短语开头，紧接着跟个分词短语，从形式上来看就不舒服，og说coordinating修饰illustration，逻辑主语错误，看来他是认为-ing分词就近修饰前面的名词了，而不是像在句尾时那样可以跳跃修饰主句主语，这点他的解释我也是不太清楚。whatever，这个形式看上去就不地道。
(C)将B中的分词短语变成了非限定定语从句，正式修饰illustrations，coordinate的主语是she，符合逻辑
(D)coordinate与B P的关系应该是主动关系，而非-ed分词所表示的被动关系
(E)这个我当时没有直接排除掉，但仔细看就会发现，这个逻辑是不对的，in her book illustrations 成为了修饰 coordinate的状语，而coordinate的宾语却又是illstrations ，像是已经站在车上面，还想要拉车一样。
理解有限，请大家指教

smalldan · 发表于 2010-2-10 09:39:22

og的解释我有一点不理解，A项中的coordinating前根本没有is怎么可能会认为是现在进行时呢？应该只会使-ing分词吧，请nn指教！

smalldan · 发表于 2010-2-11 01:32:36

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og的解释我有一点不理解，A项中的coordinating前根本没有is怎么可能会认为是现在进行时呢？应该只会使-ing分词吧，请nn指教！谢谢

Jennifer789 · 发表于 2010-2-11 07:36:28

ding
og的解释我有一点不理解，A项中的coordinating前根本没有is怎么可能会认为是现在进行时呢？应该只会使-ing分词吧，请nn指教！谢谢

-- by 会员 smalldan (2010/2/11 1:32:36)

先谢ls两位，总算是有点眉目啦~~ 这个问题期待NN~~

smalldan · 发表于 2010-2-11 08:22:44

OG的解释：(A) The participial phrase does not clearly modify the noun in the preceding phrase; use of the present progressive form of the verb confuses the sequence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb capitalized.
请nn看看，谢谢啦，为什么OG认为coordinating是现在进行时呢？

imagelan · 发表于 2010-6-12 05:53:45

同样的困惑呢！照我的理解-ing表示的主从句的动作同时发生，-ing可以还原为与主句同时态的动词或一般现在式，但是不能还原为复杂时态的动词形式，比如完成时。A选中
BP, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen .....
此时，如将-ing 还原应为，
BP, in her book illustrations, which carefully coordinated with her narratives, capitalized on her keen....
虽然还原为非限定定从后，coordinate 的逻主为illustration是错的。但是，至少coordinating 是可以还原为与主句动词同时态的形式的。
所以，对OG中的解释甚是不明啊：use of the present progressive form of the verb confuses the sequence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb capitalized.
还请nn们帮忙啊~~

wolfheulen · 发表于 2010-6-12 06:38:37

A. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on
her keen observation and love of the natural world.

首先，present progressive form of the verb不等于present progressive tense. 你可以把present progressive form of the verb翻译成 "动词的 -ing 形式“

这句话本身的表达是错误的，所以可以从不同的角度来批评。我们可以理解为这句话想表达这样的意思：Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, which is carefully coordinated with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world. 如果是这样，那么coordinated等同于一个形容词，形容book of illustrations. 这样的话，coordinating可以被说成是错用了present participle，而应该用past participle.

但是这句话也可以理解成carefully coordinating这个短语是用来形容Betrix Potter的，那么翻译过来就是Betrix Potter在coordinating的同时已经capitalized了。这样就是OG所说的错误。

Hope that helps

savageprince · 发表于 2010-7-6 14:13:10

嗯..同意ls..

还想问问ls一句, 如果E改成: BP, in her booki illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives and

能不能选啊.?

我当时选E是因为觉得coordinated和capitalized这两个动词好parallel啊..就忽略了carefully coordinated them with..的错误..

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