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T-9-Q39:987-675求教~~

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楼主
发表于 2008-7-11 15:44:00 | 只看该作者

T-9-Q39:987-675求教~~

  Study showhat young people with higher-than-average blood pressure and their families have a history of high blood pressure are ore likely than others to develop a severe form of the condition.

a. and their families have a history of high blood pressure

b. whose families have a history of high blood pressure

c. and a history of high blood pressure runs in the family

d. whose families have a histories of high blood pressure running in them

e. with a history of high blood pressure running in their family.

这题我选的是C.我觉得应该是和higher-than-average blood pressure并列的. 意思上也说得过去.但是答案是B..大家帮忙看看~~~

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-11 19:24:00 | 只看该作者

诶~~呼唤高手诶~~

板凳
发表于 2008-7-11 20:40:00 | 只看该作者

C我认为还是有点问题。

pressure runs in the family是一个不规范的从句,省略的that应该补出

而且即使宾从是规范的也比较冗余,不如B。a family history of ...会好些

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-12 11:55:00 | 只看该作者

但是这里的runs修饰的应该是 history啊~还是没想明白~~~

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发表于 2008-7-12 12:03:00 | 只看该作者
c,with higher-than-average blood pressure 是young people的定語,如果要並列,and a history of high blood runing in the family。。。這樣看兩個定語的並列也不夠規範哦~~
所以。。。c不妥。。。。
6#
发表于 2008-7-12 14:01:00 | 只看该作者
恩 C的意思应该是with的两个成分并列修饰young people 但是C里的runs问题很明显 所以我觉得C不妥
7#
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-13 01:00:00 | 只看该作者

是这个词本身用的不合理吗?就是对于history的修饰上?

8#
发表于 2008-7-13 01:34:00 | 只看该作者

句子结构:

Study show that + young people..... are more likely than others to......

with 介词短语和划线部分对young people修饰。

用and话,其后面的成分只能是和with的介词短语并列修饰young people.

A. 句子结构:young people 和一个完成的句子并列,

B. whose families have a history of high blood pressure, whose修饰young people,正确

C. 句子结构:young people and a history are more likely,

D. a histories 错,而且我觉得have 与 running in them 语义重复,awkward,

E. 缺少连词连接两个并列修饰成分,in their family --> in theire families, agreement,

9#
发表于 2008-10-3 18:22:00 | 只看该作者
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10#
发表于 2008-10-8 23:24:00 | 只看该作者
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