In California today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.
A. In California today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.
B. Of the Californians under the age of eighteen, today more than 43 percent of them are Hispanic, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.
C. Today, more than 43 percent of Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic, compared with about 35 percent a decade ago.
D. Today, compared to a decade ago, Californians who are Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, whereas it was about 35 percent.
E. Today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen in California account for more than 43 percent, unlike a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.
A. In California today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.
E. Today, Hispanics under the age of eighteen in California account for more than 43 percent, unlike a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.
A,E的话，主句中加粗部分是主干。但你拎出来一看就发现，占什么的43%？？句子本身意思就出现了问题。而且最后一个it也没有指代。
D. Today, compared to a decade ago, Californians who are Hispanics under the age of eighteen account for more than 43 percent, whereas it was about 35 percent.
D如果把主干标出来以后，就很明显看出来没有任何意义了。。而且，尽管比较的对象是today和a dacade ago。但是这种时间状语的比较，一般不能单纯比较两个时间点。（因为毕竟说话的意味是要比较两个时间点上不同的事或状态，单纯的比较两个时间点没有任何意思哈）
B. Of the Californians under the age of eighteen, today more than 43 percent of them are Hispanic, compared with a decade ago, when it was about 35 percent.
C. Today, more than 43 percent of Californians under the age of eighteen are Hispanic, compared with about 35 percent a decade ago.
所以B，C从大面上看是对的。但是B较C言，一个是啰嗦，一个是it无指代对象。最后一个问题是，它把Californians under the age of eighteen提了出来，就像在说这群人固定不变，现在43%的他们是Hispanic, 10年前【还是这群人】，35%是Hispanic...
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