关于倒装再请教一题

enkyklios · 发表于 2013-6-2 21:16:10

Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing.

A. Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing.
B. Nearly 99 percent of five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth have vanished.
C. Vanished are nearly 99 percent of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth.
D. Of five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them have vanished.

请问大牛除去语态的问题，C还有没有别的问题

enkyklios · 发表于 2013-6-2 21:33:33

自己顶起来

enkyklios · 发表于 2013-6-2 21:58:11

自己分析一下吧，
过去分词在句首倒装，正常语序是被动语态，本句不合适，
如果是表语形容词在句首倒装不知道有什么问题，因为vanished也可以作为形容词啊

bejamin1111 · 发表于 2013-6-2 22:55:55

你这是设问形式的发帖方式么

...我看了下manhattan，大神对C项完全无解释，看来倒装结构是不收待见啊。vanish这里用被动应该是错了。关于倒装这个，我理解的是除非intended meaning特别需要强调某一部分内容，那能不倒就不倒吧

enkyklios · 发表于 2013-6-2 23:34:53

bejamin1111 发表于 2013-6-2 22:55
你这是设问形式的发帖方式么...我看了下manhattan，大神对C项完全无解释，看来倒装结构是不收待见 ...

没有人回答所以把自己的疑惑近一步贴出来，奇怪的是关于C几乎没有人讨论

kiwifoodtown · 发表于 2013-6-3 10:48:24

C的时态也不对，的确现在完成时态比较符合意思。另外个人觉得真的没有倒装的必要，倒装了反而给人一种头轻脚重个感觉，还是D那样，索性把长长的主语拆开来比较清楚。

Apolloemma · 发表于 2013-6-3 11:09:53

Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing.

1. Same
2. Nearly 99 percent of five hundred million different species that appeared on earth have vanished.
3. Vanished are nearly 99 percent of the five hundred million different species that appeared on earth
4. Of five hundred million different species that have appeared on earth, nearly 99 percent of them have vanished.
5. Of the five hundred million different species that have appeared on earth, nearly 99 percent have vanished.

Apolloemma · 发表于 2013-6-3 11:12:57

你怎么不把题贴完整呢。

D 肯定不能选的， nearly 99 percent of them 这里的of them 重复句子开头的of ....。
我现在对 GMAC各个从句间的时态已经绝望了，这里似乎也是说不同从句间的时态是可以独立考虑的。

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