【求助】科大HKUST的新生personal commercial应该怎么写？侧重点应该是哪些？

winsy19 · 发表于 2013-5-30 09:45:22

校方要求在6月15日前提交这份commercial,要求如下：

Personal Commercial
A Brief Write-up about Yourself to Share with Your Classmates
MBA Program Office will compose a booklet named "Intake 2013 - To My Dear Fellows" This booklet will contain personal commercials of each student admitted in 2013 and will be distributed to your classmates during the Residential Program in August. Faculty will also be provided the booklet to get familiar with the new students. A Personal Commercial is a self-introduction to let your classmates know who you are, what you do and your plans. It helps you to extend your presence in the new circle you are going to establish in HKUST. Just imagine that you come across someone important for extending your network and you would like to best use his/her of interest. Below are some references to construct your own commercial. Your Background - your functional area and professional status (your expertise, your functional roles, not your job title) Your Current Employment - mainly your job position and employer Your Future focus, such as - the kind of work you want to do - the kind of contributions you want to make - the kind of accomplishments for yourself and your company Your Lifestyle , such as - the kind of activities and hobbies you like to do - the things that will make you happy in life - the dream you have in a lifetime

300字左右，有没有以前的学长或者学姐借我一份sample看看怎么写，侧重点应该放在哪些方面？

[校友答疑] 【求助】科大HKUST的新生personal commercial应该怎么写？侧重点应该是哪些？