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闲人逛逛 · 发表于 2013-4-13 20:11:51

The firstcommercially successful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically andthe first play by a Black woman to be produced on Broadway, it was LorraineHansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun thatwon the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later madeinto both a film and a musical.

A. it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the NewYork Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made

B. in 1959 A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York DramaCritics’ Circle Award and was later made

C. Lorraine Hansberry won the New York DramaCritics’ Circle Award for A Raisin in theSun in 1959, and it was later made

D. Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in1959 and was later made

E. A Raisinin the Sun,by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959,and later made it

为什么不能选B呢？？？

bejamin1111 · 发表于 2013-4-14 01:40:43

Modifier+comma之后要紧跟逻辑主语。。。

rylstar01 · 发表于 2013-4-14 08:10:12

Ben正解。
1）你把in 1959提前的话，也改变了句子的意思，原句用的是In 1959限定的是 won the New York DramaCritics’ Circle Award这个事件
2）提前的话，In 1959就能统治整个句子的时间范畴，也就是说，会影响到and 后面的was later made movies...，换句话说，made movies这些事也是发生在1959年，获奖之后
3）一般破题的话，以Ben的说法就可以了。深究的时候可以考虑1）和2）

闲人逛逛 · 发表于 2013-4-14 20:58:07

bejamin1111 发表于 2013-4-14 01:40
Modifier+comma之后要紧跟逻辑主语。。。

没有很懂？？？

bejamin1111 · 发表于 2013-4-14 21:17:17

The first commercially successful drama 的逻辑主语是LorraineHansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun，这这里前者是后者的modifier，前句被逗号隔开时，逗号后面要看到的第一个词组就要是这个modifier的逻辑主语...

闲人逛逛 · 发表于 2013-4-15 09:05:48

bejamin1111 发表于 2013-4-14 21:17
The first commercially successful drama 的逻辑主语是LorraineHansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun，这这里 ...

原来如此！！！O(∩_∩)O谢谢！！！再顺便问个事儿~~~现在作文是只考一篇了吧？？那是考AA还是AI呢？？

bejamin1111 · 发表于 2013-4-15 10:57:23

闲人逛逛发表于 2013-4-15 09:05
原来如此！！！O(∩_∩)O谢谢！！！再顺便问个事儿~~~现在作文是只考一篇了吧？？那是考AA还是AI呢？？ ...

作文这个到不清楚，你问问其他人啊

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