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jadelily35 · 发表于 2013-9-3 16:35:14

69. The Anasazi settlements at Chaco Canyon were built on a spectacular scale, with more than 75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms each, were connected by a complex regional system of roads.
A. scale, with more than 75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms each, were
B. scale, with more than 75 carefully engineered structure, of up to 600 rooms each,
C. scale of more than 75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms, each that had been
D. scale of more than 75 carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms and with each
E. scale of more than 75 carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms, each had been

不知道应该从哪个角度去解题，看到一堆逗号就已经晕晕乎乎了的

摇曳的叶子 · 发表于 2013-9-3 17:21:20

69. The Anasazi settlements at Chaco Canyon were built on a spectacular scale, with more than 75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms each, were connected by a complex regional system of roads.
A. scale, with more than 75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms each, were 一个句子两个谓语
B. scale, with more than 75 carefully engineered structure, of up to 600 rooms each,
C. scale of more than 75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms, each that had been 没有强调时序，应该是simple past，与were平行。
D. scale of more than 75 carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms and with each and两边完全不parallel
E. scale of more than 75 carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms, each had been 同A，同C

of up to 600 rooms each 其实这个表达让我很纠结

橙圆 · 发表于 2013-9-11 14:21:39

这个题PREP07里有。

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The Anasazi settlements at Chaco Canyon were built on a spectacular scale with more than 75
carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms each, were connected by a complex regional
system of roads.

(A) with more than 75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms each, were
(B) with more than 75 carefully engineered structures, of up to 600 rooms each,
(C) of more than 75 carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms, each that had been
(D) of more than 75 carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms and with each
(E) of more than 75 carefully engineered structures of up to 600 rooms each had been

考点: 句子结构（Grammatical Structure）逻辑表达（Logical Predication）有效用词（Diction）
1) 一个完整的句子之中只能有一个谓语动词，两个谓语动词之间必须有连词进行连接
2) each 型独立主格,强调句尾名词,形式为:
句子 + 复数名词结尾, each + 介词短语/形容词短语/-ed 形式/-ing 形式。
例:Chinese, the most ancient of living writing systems, consists of tens of thousands of
ideographic characters, each character a miniature calligraphic composition inside its own square
frame.

(A) 划线的 were 作为谓语和划线部分之前的谓语 were 重复，应该去掉或者用连词 and 连接；
(B) 正确，of up to 600 rooms each 作为插入语修饰 structures，connected 分词跳过插入语修饰前

面最邻近的名词 structures.
(C) 将 with 改变成 of 后，介词的修饰对象发生改变；原句 with 结构修饰 built,而 of 结构修饰的是 scale;
将插入语变成句子一部分后，each 同位语修饰的对象也发生改变，变成了修饰最邻近的 rooms 而不
是 structures，rooms 被马路连接不符合题目原意和逻辑表达；each 同位语从句用过去完成时同样没
有必要性.
(D) 按 D 答案给出的句意，with each 和 on a spectacular scale 平行，但 each connected by 改变了
原文的句意，原文没有表达出每一个都被连接的意义
(E) 如果 each 做代词指代主语应该在 each 前面加上连词 and，E 答案中 each 后面是完整句子但没
有连词进行连接；had been 过去完成时没有必要性。

句子结构: The Anasazi settlements…were built on...structures,…,connected by…

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