周末憋了好久，终于最后一天晚上弄出一片issue。相比argument，感觉issue完全没什么思路，后来出去跑个步，整理了一下思路，花了一个小时搞了第一篇issue。
希望大神们给个大体的意见，主要是希望在整体的思路或方向上觉得我写的是不是靠谱。
[size=1.05em]As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
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The statement asserts that ability of humans to think for themselves will deteriorate as they rely more and more on techonology. Obviously some specific ability of humans will decline as technology replace us to do. However, advancement of technology offers better enviroment for human to think and study, by free us from poverty and take much repetitive work. Our ken and knowledge also widen along with the progress of technology.
Along with the advancement of technology, many tools were invented to help humans solve problems. Longer people use these tools, people realized that it’s more difficult to finish their work without these tools. For example, people calculate themselves before calculator was invented. But look at now, we could see calcutors anywhere. Students use calculator to solve math question. Accountant use calculator to .We could find calculators on any computers and cell phones. Above example demonstrate how much people rely on calculator. Many of us almost unable to calculate a complex math question themselves.
But humans also got many benefits from the advancement of technology. Technology offer many convenient factors for peopel to study more fields and think more questions. The first benefits is technology help us get rid of proverty, hunger. It’s difficult for people to think when they need to worry that whether they have enough money to buy enough food to feed themselves. The land could produce more foodstaff under the promotion of technology and more and more people get away from femine. After human’s basic requirement are satisfied, they will spend time and energe to think some things such as arts, technology, philosophy. The second benifit is technology free us from some boring and repetitive works, then humans have more times to study and think. Many factories have introduce robots to replace workers to finish repetitive works. Printer could copy files much more quick and precise compare with human. These inventions save much times for humane and they could do many things such as study and think.
Except make a better enviroment for studying and thinking, advancement of technology also help human to widen their kens and knowledges by break some limitations such as space and time. When people contact more knowledges and questions they never met before, it may raise their interesting to study and think. For example, humans just stay at limited areas before cars, trains and airplane were invented. What they learn and think are limited by space as they can’t contact people live in another areas. But after modern transportation were invented, people could travel across the world and learn anything they want. A chinese students could have its PHD degree in an America college to study the difference between Chinese culture and American culture. A african scientist could think about how to implement agriculture technology from America to africa to solve the femine. All these examples demonstrate that technology help lead human to a new world. The new world produces more questions need human to solve and they will impel human to think how to solve these questions.
Technology makes our lives more convinient and comfortable. Althought some of them undirectly impact our ability of think, but most of them could improve our ability of think for ourselves
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