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发表于 2013-2-26 17:59:30 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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13/46 Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study. 大学应该要求每个学生选修自己专业以外的各种学科。
70. Claim:   Universities   should   require   every   student   to   take   a   variety   of   courses   outside   the student's major field of study.
Reason: Acquiring   knowledge   of   various   academic   disciplines   is   the   best   way   to   become   truly educated.
结论:大学应该要求每个学生选修自己专业以外的各种学科。
原因:接受真正的教育的最佳途径是获得各种学科知识。
140. Some people believe that universities should require every student to take a variety of courses
outside the   student's   field of  study. Others believe that universities should not  force   students to take any courses other than those that will help prepare them for jobs in their chosen fields.
有些人认为大学应该要求每个学生选修自己专业以外的各种学科。也有人认为大学不应该强
迫学生学习任何课程,除非这些课程有利于学生在所选的领域就业。
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The author take for granted that it is the best approach for students to be well educated if they take courses of all majors. This advocation means that the more knowledge you learn, the more educated or achievements you will get.

I am inclined to support this idea which can be substantiated by the following discussions. Due to all courses being related to each other, touching more academic fields may contribute to major research by inspiring scholars' thoughts. Lucas, a well-known economist, taking Math as a reasoning tool, explant the mystery of Lucas that why capital of developed countries is not invested to poor countries under the circumstances that poor countries have more cheaper resources. By mixing these 2 subjects, Lucas tackle this problem clearly and readily instead of tedious words.

However, being well-educated people doesn't mean he or she took lots of courses. People also have to have a good personality and correct values. Chen Shuibian, a predecessor of Ma Yingjiu who is Taiwan's president now, graduated from the department of laws in Taiwan University, the best one in Taiwan Province. And his rank in major is very high. Nevertheless, due to his bribery and corruption, he failed to go on in his politic career, which is mainly resulted from his incorrect notions. The personal value is crucial to a person's whole life, not only the education.
In addition, studying so many courses simultaneously may take too much time to make the students specialized in their major, which will waste their gifts. Han Han, an excellent writer in China mainland, has created many popular books in his writing career. He used to be a "bad" boy in high school because he had lots of subjects failed except for Chinese and getting many trophies in writing competition. But he refused an admission to Fudan University, a top3 university in China in that Han knows himself well that he is born for writing, not a well-developed writer whose knowledge covers all academic fields.
In modern society, people have to be faced with the reality. An increasing number of graduate have been an intern for at least one job. So, studying other courses waste their free time to earn work experience of the resume, which miss the original purpose of their entering the university.

Absorbing a large amount of knowledge is not the sole essential element to be Well-educated people, which may accelerate the process to be an educated person. But people have to take many actual problems and their own inspirations into account, like living or dreams, which may be contradictory to that.
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沙发
发表于 2013-2-26 21:07:06 | 只看该作者
不建议你把题号合起来写,因为不同的题目形式和要求,对应不同的写法,虽然同样的话题可以享用类似的提纲,但如果写法也一样的话,就显得不够specific and centered.
你的思路还是很不错的
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2013-2-26 23:27:10 | 只看该作者
求问缺陷。。。THX LZ。。。
地板
发表于 2013-2-27 08:54:37 | 只看该作者
求问缺陷。。。THX LZ。。。
-- by 会员 JCBrenda (2013/2/26 23:27:10)

你改写一下吧,针对具体哪个题目和instruction
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