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体力不济的向6分冲刺的hncsxj恳请修改TWE 168

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楼主
发表于 2004-11-4 13:41:00 | 只看该作者

体力不济的向6分冲刺的hncsxj恳请修改TWE 168

168 Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of whether or not it is worthwhile for students to study in another country. As far as I am concerned, I strongly support that students pursue their diplomas or degrees abroad. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my point of view.



To begin with, studying abroad helps students learn advanced knowledge, improve different skills and therefore acquire competitive competencies. Modern education analysis contends that students studying abroad will benefit from the different cultures, the way people think and the like, so that they are easy to stand out from others. Facts witness many examples. For instance, the CEOs of top 10 IT companies in China admitted that their competitive advantages came from their broadened field of vision during their overseas studies.



Next, having more opportunities is another paramount important reason. The gap between countries is a threaten to those young men, but also create a lot of opportunities. Therefore, many students study in the destined country first, and then try to explore some fields new to the country but familiar to their hometown. Hence, by playing the role of international bridges, they get more opportunities than others.



However, dissenters may deem that the students studying abroad will suffer from loneness, cultural impacts and countless uncertainties. Obviously, they fail to realize that most of these obstacles will be overcome. In fact, it is these unusual experiences that inspire the potential abilities of the students. Therefore, more and more people favor studing abroad.



To sum up, it is safe to arrive the conclusion that studying abroad will benefit these students in long term. In fact, not only more and more students are trying to study abroad, but also more and more countries are taking effective policies to encourage these behaviors.


沙发
发表于 2004-11-4 22:43:00 | 只看该作者

给GG一个链接吧,GG可以参考stoneren牛GG的大作

现在大家忙着做TWE185,重复的题GG先看看以前的讨论吧。。。

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=68&ID=67642

板凳
发表于 2004-11-5 10:49:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用hncsxj在2004-11-4 13:41:00的发言:
168 Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of whether or not it is worthwhile for students to study in another country. As far as I am concerned, I strongly support that students pursue their education diplomas or degrees abroad. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my point of view.






To begin with, studying abroad helps students learn advanced knowledge, improve different skills, and hence therefore acquire competitive competencies. Modern education analysis (there is very strange to use this term. it is nonsense to create this authority) contends that students studying abroad will benefit from the different cultures, the way people think and the like, so that they are easy to stand out from others. Facts witness many examples. For instance, the CEOs of top 10 IT companies in China admitted that their competitive advantages came from their broadened field of vision during their overseas studies.





Next, having more opportunities is another paramount important reason. The gap between countries is a threaten to those young men, but also create a lot of opportunities. Therefore, many students study in the destined country first, and then try to explore some fields new to the country but familiar to their hometown. Hence, by playing the role of international bridges, they get more opportunities than others.





However, dissenters may deem that the students studying abroad will suffer from loneness, cultural impacts and countless uncertainties. Obviously, they fail to realize that most of these obstacles will be overcome. In fact, it is these unusual experiences that inspire the potential abilities of the students. Therefore, more and more people favor studing abroad.





To sum up, it is safe to arrive draw the conclusion that studying abroad will benefit these students in long term. In fact, not only more and more students are trying to study abroad, but also more and more countries are taking effective policies to encourage this trend these behaviors.





very good essay. 6.0 is not far away.

keep practicing.

地板
发表于 2004-11-5 16:53:00 | 只看该作者
谢谢guandreamGG
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-11-5 22:57:00 | 只看该作者

谢谢guandream。

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