OG一道语法题的困惑~求指点

冰河世纪 · 发表于 2012-5-3 20:19:58

112. As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb
with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated
about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with
such vision.
(A) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the
womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it
would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if
it were an adult with such vision.
(B) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb
with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be
rated about 20/500, or legally blind as an adult.
(C) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the
womb, its rudimentary sense of vision would be
rated about 20/500; qualifying it to be legally
blind if an adult.
(D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb
with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be
rated about 20/500; an adult with such vision
would be deemed legally blind.
(E) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the
womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which
would deemed legally blind for an adult, would
be rated about 20/500.
Grammatical construction
Th is sentence fails to convey its meaning
because its construction is faulty. It begins with
a subordinate clause, whose subject is a baby; the
subject of the main clause, it appears to refer back
to baby. However, reading the main clause reveals
that it is intended to refer to the sense of vision the
first time it is used and to the baby the second
time. Th e whole sentence must be revised, and the
relationships between the two parts of the
sentence must be clarified.
A Repeated use of it creates confusion because
the referent is not clear.
B Th e final phrase is awkwardly and
ambiguously attached to the sentence.
C Th e use of a semicolon instead of a comma
creates a sentence fragment.
D Correct. One independent clause describes
a baby’s vision, the other an adult’s; the two
independent but linked main clauses are
correctly separated with a semicolon in this
version of the sentence.
E Subordinate clause beginning with which is
awkward and ambiguous. E这个解释让我觉得很勉强，因为从句用which 开头是很正常的，像OG上紧挨着它的题目，正确答案选C，就可以看出这一点。
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111. Construction of the Roman Colosseum, which was
offi cially known as the Flavian Amphitheater, began in
A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian, was completed
a decade later, during the reign of Titus, who opened
the Colosseum with a one-hundred-day cycle of
religious pageants, gladiatorial games, and
spectacles.
(A) which was offi cially known as the Flavian
Amphitheater, began in A.D. 69, during the reign
of Vespasian,
(B) offi cially known as the Flavian Amphitheater,
begun in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian,
and
(C) which was offi cially known as the Flavian
Amphitheater, began in A.D. 69, during the reign
of Vespasian, and
(D) offi cially known as the Flavian Amphitheater and
begun in A.D. 69, during the reign of Vespasian it
(E) offi cially known as the Flavian Amphitheater,
which was begun in A.D. 69, during the reign of
Vespasian, and
求指教。。。。

冰河世纪 · 发表于 2012-5-6 00:25:08

求指教啊~
如果路人也困惑也还请吭一声啊~

Hzhangxueke · 发表于 2012-5-6 11:01:15

第一题选D，不是选C；第二题选C

冰河世纪 · 发表于 2012-5-7 22:44:07

答案不是重点。。这个地球上谁都有OG的说。。。
是说第一道题的 E选项的解释不理解~

z53495532 · 发表于 2012-11-5 16:31:13

我看了很多帖子，大概明白E错在哪里了
两个错误 1，情态动词后面要加原型，那么 would deemed挫
2. which 修饰的是 Sense of vision, sense of vision would deemed legally blind for an adult的逻辑表达错误，因为不能说，视力将被认为是 legally blind 【好像翻译成法定盲人】。

Maximus07 · 发表于 2012-11-5 17:12:12

我看了很多帖子，大概明白E错在哪里了
两个错误 1，情态动词后面要加原型，那么 would deemed挫
2. which 修饰的是 Sense of vision, sense of vision would deemed legally blind for an adult的逻辑表达错误，因为不能说，视力将被认为是 legally blind 【好像翻译成法定盲人】。

-- by 会员 z53495532 (2012/11/5 16:31:13)

同意，deemed 前面少了be
sense of vision不能说是blind，只有人（baby）才能是blind

花露水6 · 发表于 2012-11-25 18:21:37

我看了很多帖子，大概明白E错在哪里了
两个错误 1，情态动词后面要加原型，那么 would deemed挫
2. which 修饰的是 Sense of vision, sense of vision would deemed legally blind for an adult的逻辑表达错误，因为不能说，视力将被认为是 legally blind 【好像翻译成法定盲人】。

-- by 会员 z53495532 (2012/11/5 16:31:13)

这个解释好

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