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sweetmelody321 · 发表于 2012-8-18 15:35:18

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It is important to know what is happening around world, even if it does not affect your personal lives.

I agree with the statement that it is important to know what is happening around the world, even if it does not affect our personal lives. Because the events happening in the world will affect us in a long term, have some thing for us to learn and are a good topic to communicate.

First of all, no matter what the event is, it somehow has some connections with us and will affect our lives in a long term. Some people may think only the thing happening around them is worth to pay attention to, while they don't care much about the international news which doesn't affect them directly. For example, many people don't notice global warming, because it seems has not affect our daily lives yet. Consequently, these people still keep on an old way of life which will aggravate the problem. They still drive their cars everyday even to a nearby place, they don't turn off lights when they go out and they open the air conditioning all the year around. However what they are doing now is accelerating the global warming. Although we may not be affected immediately, our children will suffer the problems caused by it.

Another benefit we can get from international event is we can learn a lot from it to improve ourselves or our country. Take the shooting events happens frequently in the western countries these days as an example. They are serious social problems which are also really thought provoking, though they have no effect on our lives. Are there any flows in laws about guns or are there any problems in education? These questions are all worth other countries learning in order to avoid the same problem.

Furthermore, knowing more international events can help you open a nice conversation with others because news happened around world is always a common topic between people. Recently, what people talk the most is the London Olympic Games. I check the result of almost every important competition so I can talk with my classmates when we meet. We talk about which team won the football games, who has broken the record, and even which athlete looks more charming. But if you don't know any about the recent news it will be less fun for you to talk with others.

Generally speaking, taking into all these factors, I strongly agree that it is important to know what is happening around world, even if is does not affect our personal lives.

sweetmelody321 · 发表于 2012-8-18 15:35:54

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more facilities or more teachers

Schools always confront the dilemma whether put more money in buying more facilities or hiring more teachers. Different school will make different choice due to their own situations and needs. As an undergraduate student, I think having more facilities is more important than having more teachers. My argument for this view is based on the following points.

It's undeniable that having more teachers has many advantages. More teachers can provide more attention to every student, so that students can get more help from teacher on both life and study. For example, students can get more chance to answer questions in class because there will be fewer students in a single class. If they have personal problem which they can't handle by themselves, they can also turn to teachers to get advices and helps. Conversely, if there are fewer teachers, they may not have enough energy to take care of each student.

However, more facilities have more significant influence on students. More facilities mean more accessible to advantage technology, wider choice to develop their hobbies and more convenient life in campus. All of these can help students to get a better development in school.

For university students who are preparing their careers or further studies, it is important to have a broad view of knowledge, which is exactly the advantage facilities can bring to them. Especially for students major in science, new facilities play an important role in their research and experiments. Moreover, advantage facilities also keeps students open minds and helps them stay in the forefront of the technology. Consequently, these students will become more creative and competitive in their future lives.

Additionally, having more facilities also riches our lives in school. We will have new swimming pool and new gym for us to exercise, new hall to have club or rehearsal, and new restaurants for meal or meet friends. All of these bring us a lot of happiness and convenience. Instead of staying in dorm wondering where to go or where is less crowded, we can do more interesting things in school with friends.

Generally speaking, taking account into all these factors, I find there is more advantage in having more facilities than having more teachers. Having more facilities not only benefits us in academic but also riches our daily lives in campus. Besides, we should be independent and rely less on our teachers in university.

sweetmelody321 · 发表于 2012-8-19 09:43:03

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