求助，考试这样写结构可以吗？

Iris526 · 发表于 2012-8-12 16:29:41

对于二选一的题目，我一直选的结构模板是，开头综合阐述下，表明自己prefer哪种，然后 1,2每段一个理由，然后让步admittdly来一段说下另一个选择的优势。最后总结说自己还是prefer第一段选的观点。这种结构比较保守，但是如果遇到三选一的时候，就不知道结构应该怎样了？而且想问，能否每周选择都把优势或者劣势写一写，然后说具体选择哪种要具体情况具体分析？
如下是我刚写的作文，请大家帮忙看下，考试这样写ok吗?有什么地方需要注意修改？谢谢了！
题目： People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing things; other people learn by reading about things; others learn by listening to people talk about things. Which of these methods of learning is best for you?

Every individual has his/her own style of learning, in which he/she finds most suitable for him/her to attain the best result. Some people prefer to learn through practical experience; others believe that learning by oneself is a good choice; while others like to attend class to listening to people talk about things. With the development of modern society and technology, the appearance of quiet a few studying tools provide people with more opportunities to choose the most suitable studying ways according to the practical situation. As for me, these ways of studying all have some advantages, how to choose one depend on what subject you learn. My arguments for this point are listed as follow.

In the first place, learning by reading about things is a fast and the most common way to learn. A recent survey shows that 70 percent of people are mainly depend on reading to learn things, and they can memory the things better through reading than through listening. In fact, people are usually easy to forget the things they just hear. So if you want a person to remember something important, the best way is to let him read instead of just telling him in oral. Besides, reading is a freedom and independent studying way, which can be achieved at any place and at any time. In the modern society, the majority of people are always so busy that they cannot stand down to spend too much time to attend class. But if you have a good reading skill, you are able to learn a lot of things in your spare time by reading.

Although reading maybe is a good study way in some time, it is not suitable to learn some skills, such as swimming, fixing a car and doing some experiments. There is no doubt that learning some practical skill must be done by yourself because you can accumulate your experiences and learn some practical knowledge that book do not tell you. If you only depend on reading rather than trying, you will be an armchair strategist(纸上谈兵).

Another pointing worth to point out is that when you learn something more complicated, it is always best to listening people to talk about things, taking classes for example. When you are in the class, teachers can act as a guide to lead you success and give you a hand when you encounter some difficulties. Without teachers, you would be searching in darkness without a torch to light the way for you. What’s more, listening teachers’ advises will receive the benefit of teachers’ knowledge, broaden the scope of the topic and provide other opportunities to deep into the research. It is impossible to learn a great deal of knowledge only by reading the textbook yourself without the help of teachers.

To sum up, from what has been discussed above, we may safely to draw a conclusion that three ways of studying all have their own advantage. As a matter of fact, which one should be chosen depends on what subject you learn and you actual situation.

求助，考试这样写结构可以吗？

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