A中的结构是“SVO,doing”。这个结构如果正确的话需要:a doing是主句的伴随或主句动作的直接结果 b doing修饰之前的整个动作且doing动作适用于主句主语 即 the "comma + ing" modifiershould only be used when: (A) it MODIFIES THE ENTIRE ACTION of thepreceding clause, and it APPLIES TO THE SUBJECT of that clause; AND (B) one of the following is true: (1) the "ing" action isSIMULTANEOUS with, and SUBORDINATE to, the main action; - i ran down the sidewalk, flapping my armswildly (2) the "ing" action is a DIRECTAND IMMEDIATE CONSEQUENCE of the main action. - i got a 100 on the most recent exam,bringing my average up to 91 A中的perceiving不符合上述规则。 perceiving根据意思来看,其动作发出者是人们,即逻辑主语应该是人们,不是确指的谁。 这种情况是很典型的被动语态的使用情况,perceive应该以被动出现。 -- by 会员 jeffery2541 (2012/7/29 16:56:23)
多谢 |