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[独立写作] 12.2考试 求大神提点

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发表于 2012-11-22 12:57:33 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式


12.2三战 写一篇独立写作仍需一个上午,急求大神提点
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-22 12:59:20 | 只看该作者

11.22 终于产出的第一篇练习

日期将近,深陷申请琐事中,求大神指点。

Your job will have more effect on your happiness than the social life does.


The definitionof happiness varies from person to person. As for me, it largely depends onmaterial life of family, proper circle of friends and choice to self-implement.In this case, my job as a steady source of revenue is the fundamentality of allabove while social life as a way of exchanging information and promotingfriendly relationship is super-structure of my life.


Since I ama student from a family still under the threatening of poverty, a decent job,rather than social work, is more likely to ensure a happy life.




Firstly,it is a decent job that determines a good material life and provides bettercondition for family. A well connected man may find it satisfied with friendsaround all the time, but even the most supportive and loving friends cannot payfor your food or rent for the rest of your life. When it comes to an abundantmaterial life, one has to be self-reliant and earn a living for happiness. Witha decent salary, I can dress up in style and take cosmetic for compensation andafford a new highly equipped apartment with sound securities for marriage, meanwhilemy grandparents can receive adequate treatment in time when they got sick, myparents can taste a rich variety of cuisines in fancy restaurants in daily lifeor during trips, and my relatives can foster her children’s interest forfurther development. Only when these basic needs of life are fully satisfiedcan one feel relieved and focus on other aspects of life.



Secondly, a proper job can introduce me tolikely-minded friends, which leads to happiness. My ideal friends are peoplewho have professional spirit, open mind, tranquil and endurable attitude.Nothing is more effective than practice in jobs to cultivate professionalismand accumulated mannered experience, by delving into matters, fulfilling tasks withintight schedule and dealing with different kinds of people. Just as the oldsaying, “Birds of a feather flock together.” Therefore jobs offer me prerequisiteof accessing to endearing friends.

Thirdly, working experience can bring me self-bettermentopportunities. On one hand, In most companies, self-development is aided byinternal training and some provide compensation for advanced studies. On theother hand, as society is experiencing rapid development of economic and technology,people are more likely to gain a mid-career education than before, like an MBAdegree. As far as I concern, committees consider working experience as a mainstandard selecting applicants. The more valuable applicants’ experience is, themore competitive they are and as a result the more choices they have.

Admittedly, networking is necessary forliving a happy life. Family relationships will be more harmonious if they keepcontacting, more friends will come to my life and unexpected opportunities willappear if I meet with more people and participate in their communication. However,jobs have more valuable merits as an stable, efficient, durable means for me tolive a happier life. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose job as myfinal choice for more effective factor of happiness.
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-23 22:51:13 | 只看该作者
Disagree or agree with the following statement: It is impossible to be completely honest with your friend.
Is it okay to tell a friend she looks good inpurple when it really washes her out? Should I lie to my friend to make myselflook better? Should I tell my best friend that I like his girlfriend when youreally cannot stand her?

Priceless asthey are, good friends can lift our spirits, make us laugh and remind us thatwe are loved. They will appreciate us all the more if they can count on us tobe the persons in their lives that tell them straight. Unfortunately, since whentrying to be completely honest, we might say something brutally that may hurt theirfeelings, many of us struggle most with honesty in our everyday life. However, itis impossible to keep completely honest with our friends in a gentle manner.

There is afine line between honesty and rudeness. Our friends do not want us to lie tothem, but they also do not need you to lay your negative opinions on them. Forexample, let's say a friend is going after a promotion again. He/she has triedout five times, and has been rejected each and every try. You suspect he/shejust isn't qualified and want to offer some advice. In brutal way, it will be, “Ireally don't think you're going to get that promotion. Why do you bothertrying? You're just setting yourself up for failure." While in gently way,it will be, "You've been very determined about this job. Why is it soimportant to you?" There is a balance between honesty and just blurtingout words that can harm for years to come. Check ourselves to make sure ourrespond without jealousy or anger, which can also add to brutal honesty ratherthan gentle honesty.

Most peoplecan appreciate honesty, as long as it is given with caring and respect. Fear ofhow someone else will react to the truth is the reason so many people oftentell those "little white lies." There is always a fear that theperson who receives the truth will yell or stop being your friend. Also,realize that some friends may get mad at first, but often a good friend willget over their initial anger and defensiveness to realize you only had his orher best interests at heart. And if that person doesn't get over it, then maybeit is time to evaluate how good a friend that person really was. Being honestdoesn't mean offering our friends unwanted advice, either. It's okay to tellthe truth, and if we are concerned about one aspect of their life, speak up. Justdo it in a loving manner.

Friends makeyou feel comfortable with yourself, so you don’t need to act like something youare not. Your friends know your shortcomings and love you anyway. To that end,a healthy friendship includes plenty of gentle honest. Your friend will not lieto you, but they will not try and hurt your feelings either. As a result, youwill know where you stand with your friend and will not be afraid to share yourtrue opinion.
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-11-24 12:20:25 | 只看该作者
Contributes on an enjoyablevacation, please select one of three selection. Good food, Good location andwith good friends to travel.
By enjoyable vacation is meant safety, sensibleplan and rapport emotional exchange. And good friends are those who live life, havea congenial soul and character with me and will not be embarrassed even if wehave not seen each other for a long time. In this case, good friend is the bestchoice of the three.

Vacation companions make it safer. As safetyis fundamental factor of a nice vacation, I put it in the first place. Accordingto police statistics, thieves, rapists, and murderers are all much more likelyto target a single person walking alone than to target a group of two or morepeople. If go on a trip, to save money, a person traveling alone might sleep ina dorm room. Apart from the noise and inconvenience of sharing a room with alarge number of strangers, travelers also have to be constantly vigilant toprevent other people from stealing your belongings. When traveling with acompanion you can take turns watching each other’s valuable on trains,restaurants, parks, and other public places frequented by tourists. It will bebetter if the friend is living in the tourist destination, because he/she canbe a good guide and I can avoid the risk of cultural misconceptions or steppinginto dangerous areas.

It is helpful for making a sensible plan toenjoy spare time with lovely friends. By scheduling meetings with friends, I canhave my vacation mapped out as effectively as possible, compared with arrangingtime directly, which I really do a bad work in due to my weak sense of time. Onthe other hand, the activities to enjoy in vacation, including tasting deliciousfood in fancy restaurants and watching nice scenery, will be more rich andinteresting through discussion and sometimes guidance of friends. During thesecollege years, my best friends and I studied in different cities, therefore we canonly meet in winter vacation. However, we really had a good time in kinds ofactivities we determined by debating, such as making cakes and clay potteries,walking along seaside and try food never eaten before. Thanks to my friends, plansbecame easier to set up and unforgotten memories arose from them.
Meanwhile, spending vacation with friendsis conductive to communication and sharing feelings. Obviously, though good foodand location may provide a nice environment for people to have a comfortabletalk, the people, talking with you, listening to you, or just staying aside, arethe most essential and important parts in relationships developing.
Just as Tennessee Williams address “Life ispartly what we make it, and partly what it is made by the friends wechoose." So do vacation time.
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