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菜鸟~第一次写托福作文,求教

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发表于 2012-7-5 23:00:02 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
第一次写的作文,不是后面那个长的,是前一篇,不知道应该怎么写才合理
指导一下这个结构应该怎么布置比较好?
求各位哥们姐们指点一下啊!!!
From the lecture, the speeker disagree with the position of International style which has been talked about in the reading.On one hand, the figure of the architures in International style is defined one.Although the reading emphasis this style is charactized by function and rejection of traditional decoration,the lecture indicates that it brings the city an boring modern deceration.

On another,those uniform figure of the buildings seems to be lost elegance, even cheap and ridiculous, which said by the speeker.The supporers promotes the International style is a utilitarian simplicity, besides these simplicity boost a architectural movement.However,the speaker suggests that, if we follow this type of architecture, the world would lose creativity and elegancy.

Finally, the lecture also discusses about the architectures in International style cause the buildings ugly and unfriendly.Although these buildings might be useful, the cold figure would not help workers to work activly.Even more, some people might be influenced by these in psychological aspect.
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