拖延症晚期患者也有春天暨非牛6月9日二战作文目标27可以吗T T

lushangbo · 发表于 2012-5-13 17:56:41

作为一个拖延症晚期患者只能用这种每天不完成作业会被人鄙视的方法来鞭策自己，希望各种牛人轻拍T T
明日开始brand new me好吗T T

lushangbo · 发表于 2012-5-14 20:07:18

今日作业，是否完全对朋友诚实。玻璃心请轻拍T T T T
Honesty is one of qualities which define a good person. Most people judge a person by whether she or he can be honest with others. However, there is a debated statement that it is impossible to be totally honest with one’s friends. In my point of view, I agree with this statement based on the following reasons.

Admittedly, in the relationship between people, honesty plays an important role. It is not only a quality many successful celebrities bear, but also what our parents required us in our childhood. However, under two situations, I think it is impossible to be completely honest with friends. First of all, when my friend reaches her lowest point in life now, but there is something bad she should know, I will choose not to tell her about this at this moment. Until she feels better, I will tell her the whole thing. Because the meaning of friendship also includes to share sorrow with your friends, doesn’t it?

In addition, another condition I will choose not to stay true to my friends is that when she needs confidence, I will give her all the courage no matter how impossible and unrealistic her goal is. Because I know how essential confidence is to one person. For example, my friend Jessica was a member of a chess team, she had talent but she had attended in this team just for a short time. But she had the attempt to gain a silver medal in the coming university competition. She told her team members about this, everybody said, ‘stopping dreaming and waiting for the next year’. Although I also felt it was difficult for her in this year, I didn’t let her know about my feeling, and still encouraged her. And you know what, she finally got the silver medal in the competition. Therefore, if my friends need confidence, I will encourage her no matter how difficult and impossible her goal is.

In all, it is true that honesty is a precious quality to everyone, but it needs flexibility when putting into practice. When your friends are in trouble, or need your encourage, I think telling a white lie for a moment will not have negative impact on friendship because all you want is making her happy. However, under most circumstances, stay true to each other is necessary in the relationship between friends.

lushangbo · 发表于 2012-5-24 18:38:28

这一阵晚上网不稳，每天都写了，从今天开始继续发
独立：
It is universally acknowledged that travelling is indispensable to us. On no account can we ignore the value of travelling, because it has a great influence on many aspects of our life. Recently, a public topic about travelling has brought to our eyes. Some people believe that spending money on travelling is better than saving money for future use. In my point of view, I agree with this opinion for the following reasons.

To begin with, a reason why I agree with this opinion is that spending money on travelling is a good way to broaden our horizon and scope of knowledge, which have profoundly beneficial impact on our future life. A particular example of this is that my friend Jessica travelled to more than 10 countries during university. Through every tourism to another country, she fully experienced and understood local customs and culture, which made her very outstanding in her class because she always the student who knows the most. As a result, spending money on travelling is a good chance to gain new knowledge about the world, isn’t it?

In addition, another factor which justifies my view is that we will meet new friends during the tourism, thus enlarge our social network. There is an old saying goes: the more new friends you make, the more successful you tend to be. It is not surprising that some people successfully search a job or change a job abroad through new friends met in the journey. Information between old friends tend to be monotonous and out-of-date, however, new friends can bring new energy and inspirations to us that can not be attained from saving money. Therefore, I do believe that using money to travel enable us to meet new friends who can give us new chances and inspirations.

Last but not the least, one point also deserves attention is that travelling can be a way of reducing pressure and refreshing ourselves in daily affairs. According to a survey, the rate of people who travel regularly suffering depresses and other metal diseases is 20% less than those who don’t. During the journey, people enjoy the beauty of nature, breath fresh air, thus release their pressure, as well as form a more positive attitude towards life. Consequently, it is travelling that let people escape from the pressure which society and family exert on them.

In all, we can easily draw the conclusion that spending money on travelling is better that saving money for the future. Because it enables us to broaden horizon, meet new friends, as well as release pressure. Admittedly, saving money for the future can avoid some unexpected emergencies, I still think that its advantages are less than travelling, so I reinforce my standpoint to choose spending money on travelling as my final option.

acrophobiahy · 发表于 2012-5-25 08:58:34

It is universally acknowledged that travelling is indispensable to us. On no account can we ignore the value of travelling, because it has a[influence 为不可数名词] great influence on many aspects of our life. Recently, a ~~public~~ topic about travelling has been brought to ~~our eyes~~ public eye. Some people believe that spending money on travelling is better than saving money for future use. In my point of view, I agree with this opinion for the following reasons.

To begin with, a reason why I agree with this opinion is that spending money on travelling is a good way to broaden our horizon and scope of knowledge, which ~~have~~has profoundly beneficial impact on our future life. A particular example of this is that my friend Jessica travelled to more than 10 countries during university. Through every tourism to another country, she fully experienced and understood local customs and culture, which made her very outstanding in her class because she always the student who knows the most. As a result, spending money on travelling is a good chance to gain new knowledge about the world, isn’t it?

In addition, another factor which justifies my view is that we will meet new friends during the tourism, thus enlarge our social network. There is an old saying goes: the more new friends you make, the more successful you tend to be. It is not surprising that some people successfully search a job or change a job abroad through new friends met in the journey. Information between old friends tend to be monotonous and out-of-date, however, new friends can bring new energy and inspirations to us that cannot be attained from saving money. Therefore, I do believe that using money to travel enable us to meet new friends who can give us new chances and inspirations.

Last but not the least, one point also deserves attention is that travelling can be a way of reducing pressure and refreshing ourselves in daily affairs. According to a survey, the rate of people who travel regularly suffering depresses and other metal diseases is 20% less than those who don’t. During the journey, people enjoy the beauty of nature, breath fresh air, thus release their pressure, as well as form a more positive attitude towards life. Consequently, it is travelling that let people escape from the pressure which society and family exert on them.

In all, we can easily draw the conclusion that spending money on travelling is better ~~that~~ than saving money for the future. Because it enables us to broaden horizon, meet new friends, as well as release pressure. Admittedly, saving money for the future can avoid some unexpected emergencies; I still think that its advantages are less than travelling, so I reinforce my standpoint to choose spending money on travelling as my final option.

Well done!

这篇作文不管从文章的结构还是语言方面都很赞～～我甘拜下风了

只有一点个人建议，你看看是否可以采纳

我觉得 lushangbo 可以在正文第一段先用让步的方式写一下saving money for future use 的好处，或者在详细描述了spending money on traveling 两个有点之后，再写也行。最后用I still think that its advantages are less than travelling 总结就可以了。

lushangbo · 发表于 2012-5-26 18:15:32

5.26综合TPO3

In the lecture, the professor made several points about whether the painting of a woman’s face is a work by Rembrandt, who is a famous Dutch painter in 17 century. The professor apparently refutes points illustrated in the reading material. According to the professor, the painting is painted by Rembrandt. But on the contrary, the reading presents a view that it could not be Rembrandt’s work.

First of all, the professor claims that the luxurious for collar which would not be belonged to a servant was added after hundreds of years. Because that the fur collar will make the painting more valuable. However, the reading states that the painting is not R’s work only because the fur collar is unconvincing.

Secondly, another point the professor adopts is that the reason why the woman’s face is shadowed is because the woman worn a simple light color clothes, and its reflected light illustrated the woman’s face. However, the reading states that in the painting, the light and shadow don’t fit perfectly. So the lecture totally disagrees with the view made in the reading.

Finally, the last factor the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that the wood panel actually enlarged the value of the painting. And the wood panel used in the painting is from the same wood as another painting of R. But the reading demonstrates that no painting of R uses a panel glued together. Therefore, the reading is totally confuted by the lecture.

In the conclusion, the point made in the lecture contrasts with what is presented in the reading. As the professor says, the painting of a woman’s face is actually a work by R.

lushangbo · 发表于 2012-5-26 18:16:23

真的谢谢你啊！！意见会接受的！其实这么写还是因为自己总结了模版，嘻嘻

Well done!

这篇作文不管从文章的结构还是语言方面都很赞～～我甘拜下风了

只有一点个人建议，你看看是否可以采纳

我觉得 lushangbo 可以在正文第一段先用让步的方式写一下saving money for future use 的好处，或者在详细描述了spending money on traveling 两个有点之后，再写也行。最后用I still think that its advantages are less than travelling 总结就可以了。

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