210. (GWD-1-Q2)重点题By merging its twopublishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's$21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging fromobscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks. A. their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to10 percent, a market ranging B. from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market inthe country, which ranges C. to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion bookmarket in the country, a market ranging D. in its share, from 6percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, whichranges (E) E. to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion bookmarket, which ranges OA：E 其他问题不谈，做的时候在C和D选项中的in its share这个表达这里略微停顿了一下，觉得不太舒服。 个人想法如下： increase确实可以作名词，及物动词与不及物动词，做名词时候我们见了很多increase in XX的用法；作及物动词的时候后面直接跟其宾语，如本题中的正确答案 C和D中increase 后面跟了一个介词短语，说明此处是不及物动词用法，但是个人感觉很别扭，想法如下： 如果这里increase不及物呢，放在句子中就成了the company will increase in its share，我觉得意思成了在share方面，这个公司会增长？觉得不太合适，如果要用不及物用法的话应当是the company's share will increase。这样感觉才更make sense。 个人做题的一点想法，欢迎各种拍砖
这个帖子快沉了帮顶一下~ 我觉得这题的D、E在语法上貌似都没什么错误。如果去掉E，说不定D就对了。 同意zhongshanlh童鞋的说法，能用the share of the company will increase的，用the company will increase in its share来表达总有点拐弯抹角的感觉，有点像主动优于被动的感觉。但是E就很顺畅，而且后面which指代也很清晰。
这个帖子快沉了帮顶一下~ 我觉得这题的D、E在语法上貌似都没什么错误。如果去掉E，说不定D就对了。 同意zhongshanlh童鞋的说法，能用the share of the company will increase的，用the company will increase in its share来表达总有点拐弯抹角的感觉，有点像主动优于被动的感觉。但是E就很顺畅，而且后面which指代也很清晰。
-- by 会员 teddybearj4 (2012/5/14 16:32:52)
嗯，总觉的如果increase自己作为不及物动词的时候应该说the number啊 the share等等increase，这里说the company increase感觉有点点别扭，等等其他童鞋的看法，呵呵 看题目的时候偶然想到的，也不算什么重要的考点
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