88. (29179-!-item-!-188;#058&004217) Because Miranda, the smallest moon of Uranus, has a large number of different surface features, including craters, mountains, valleys, and fractures, some astronomers suggest that at one time repeated impacts broke the surface apart, and after which the fragments were subsequently rejoined because of mutual gravitational attraction. (A) repeated impacts broke the surface apart, and after which the fragments were subsequently rejoined because of (B) repeated impacts on the surface broke it apart, after which the fragments having rejoined with (C) through repeated impacts that the surface broke apart, after which the fragments subsequently rejoined by (D) the surface broke apart with repeated impacts, after which the fragments having rejoined through (E) the surface broke apart as a result of repeated impacts, after which the fragments rejoined through
我当时排除ABC的时候是考虑which，也就是说after which 所强调的是前一句所有的动作结束以后会怎么样怎样
A) repeated impacts broke the surface apart, and after which the fragments were subsequently rejoined because of (B) repeated impacts on the surface broke it apart, after which the fragments having rejoined with (C) through repeated impacts that the surface broke apart, after which the fragments subsequently rejoined by (D) the surface broke apart with repeated impacts, after which the fragments having rejoined through (E) the surface broke apart as a result of repeated impacts, after which the fragments rejoined through
我給你的我排除點好了， (A)，and after which , and 前後該要平行，應該要有一個新的句子，但這裡確是after which，而且which 沒有指代對像，另外after跟 subsequently 是redundancy.
(B)it 可能指Miranda 或是 surface 造成ambiguity , which 沒有指代對象，having rejoined 讓人搞不清楚是had rejoined 還是 have rejoined .
(C)除了which 沒有指代對象 ，還有 after 跟 subsequently 是redundancy 之外，句子還很awkward .
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