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In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.

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发表于 2013-5-6 22:07:46 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
In 1988, the Council on Economic Priorities began publishing Shopping for a Better World, with the simple thesis of consumers having the power to change companies by the simple expedient of refusing to buy.
A. with the simple thesis of consumers having
B. which had the simple thesis of consumers having
C. where the thesis was simple: consumers having
D. with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
E. whose thesis was simple: consumers have


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- -看manhattan帖子看到一个很纠结的问题 can "with..." instead of "whose..."
D. with a thesis that is a simple one: consumers have
E. whose thesis was simple: consumers have  
如果这里D没有one 的话, 那么是不是也正确呢
Ron对于D的解答是wordiness
takeaway --> "NOUN is/was an ADJ one" is unidiomatic; there's always at least one better way to write it, usually "NOUN is/was ADJ".

楼主比较蛋疼。。所以来求问一下这个问题哈~
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发表于 2013-5-6 22:37:48 | 只看该作者
是正确,不过从concise的角度来看wordy,不如直接用with a simple thesis,是有点蛋疼的意味
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发表于 2013-5-6 23:20:20 | 只看该作者
D去掉one还要去掉a
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