OG12-57-Sentence correction

julietyoung1 · 发表于 2012-4-24 11:42:46

OG12-57
57. That educators have not anticipated the impact of
microcomputer technology can hardly be said that it
is their fault: Alvin Toffler, one of the most prominent
students of the future, did not even mention
microcomputers in Future Shock, published in 1970.
(A) That educators have not anticipated the impact
of microcomputer technology can hardly be said
that it is their fault
(B) That educators have not anticipated the impact
of microcomputer technology can hardly be said
to be at fault
(C) It can hardly be said that it is the fault of
educators who have not anticipated the impact
of microcomputer technology
(D) It can hardly be said that educators are at fault
for not anticipating the impact of microcomputer
technology
(E) The fact that educators are at fault for not
anticipating the impact of microcomputer
technology can hardly be said

正确答案D.
请问E选项中,除了The fact is wordy外还有别的错误吗？OG解释中说The inverted construction does not successfully convery the meaning of the sentence.
为什么？我看不出来？求指导啊！！

julietyoung1 · 发表于 2012-4-24 11:47:47

E中除了In fact之外就是对D的倒装，但是为什么not successfully convey the meaning of the sentence?

ximenheng · 发表于 2012-4-24 16:28:46

It can hardly be said that educators are at fault for not anticipating the impact of microcomputer technology

不能说教育者们是有错误的，在（他们）没有预测到电脑技术影响方面
主干：不能说教育者是有错的

The fact that educators are at fault for not nticipating the impact of microcomputer technology can hardly be said

事实（教育者是有错的，在（他们）没有预算到电脑技术影响方面）不能被说
主干：事实不能被说

shamrockzeng · 发表于 2012-4-24 22:38:34

恩恩，上面解析很对~~~~赞一个

OG12-57-Sentence correction

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