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Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured the preparation of great quantities of ceremonial food, the wearing of many layers of colorful clothing adorned with silver, and the recounting of traditional tribal jokes and stories.
(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured
(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarch’s home, which featured
(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring
(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured（D）
(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured
《大全注释》
72, D-13
A) run-on
B) home, which错
C) who was多余，in her home位置不对。
D) best
E) festivals in her home that, that指代不清，home or festivals。
我觉得这里which引导的定语从句是修饰festival的，后面句子里有三个修饰：食物、装饰和笑话，相比说修饰home来说似乎修饰festival更合理一点（毕竟笑话不能修饰房间）。
如果按照我的说法的话，那么B就是which定从的修饰不清~ 对吗？ | 
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发表于 2010-3-12 14:23:11
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