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发表于 2012-2-29 16:32:16 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
第二次写……木有限时……而且一开始各种拼错字……
To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

Cities reflect the prosperity of human civilization and are mirrors of modern society. Major cities especially reveal the characteristics of society for that they are the place where most talents and functions coagulate. A day in a major city offers people abundant experience of a society, but it is not enough to understand wholly the society.



Major cities of course handle the most important resources of countries even of the world. People live in the major cities enjoy the city life, excluding the better security, better transportation, better entertainment and all apparatus that citizens in small cities envy. People can easily understand that why the terminals of foreign visits always locate at the major cities. The citizens look happier and smatter, showing the brilliant aspects of the society. The major cities works as the crux of countries and the frame of countries, while covert the tarnished aspects of countries.


Under the cover of flourishing major cities, most of the worlds are still poor cities. People can read the statistics from the research that the most areas are sill fill with poverty and illness, like the Africa and other developing countries. The people there try their best to live better, without even knowing the cozy life in major cities in some places. Even excepting the most undeveloped countries, the lives in small towns are exactly different from the happiness in major cities. Small town citizens have little opportunities to use the instruments being utilized as daily use in major cities, though they may have viewed and read in TVs and books, such as subway and airplane. They earn their bread for the whole family, dreaming that one day their children could live as comfortable as the people in major cities, while dare not to watch a movie in theatre. Brutal as it, however, it is the true characteristics of the society.


Major cities are the dreams of most people in the world, while the reality is the small towns and poor area that need assistance. It is superficial to investigate the most important characteristics of a society in major cities only, leaving the other places in bereft. Stepping into different kinds of cities and pick up more places to investigate, the comprehension will surely be more realistic.

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沙发
发表于 2012-3-1 20:28:16 | 只看该作者
这篇文章写的一般吧,个人认为the most important characteristics of a society,这个你必须要能有个界定,什么是一个社会的主要特征,大城市是否能代表一个社会的主要特点?尤其在现代社会,很多城市现代化的结果造成城市给人的感觉是一个样,那么你就要给个界定,这样你接下来的内容就有的写了,而不像这个,显得有些空。比如基本的物质供应、文化多元性、社会文明程度等等
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-3-2 09:30:12 | 只看该作者
理解~~~的确写的不深~~非常感谢~~
地板
发表于 2012-3-2 11:42:17 | 只看该作者
可不可以把题目也写下来。我下载的题库居然没有2号。。
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发表于 2012-3-2 18:30:05 | 只看该作者
竹林中人说得很是!
我觉得楼主的文字不错,就是内容空了点。不过,这篇文章确实不好写!
一起加油!
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-3-5 16:45:57 | 只看该作者
非常感谢~~已经在努力地改啦~~~一起加油~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-3-5 16:47:04 | 只看该作者
http://forum.chasedream.com/GRE_Prep/thread-616339-1-1.html?extparms=ThreadCatalogID%3d70%26page%3d1

这里面有个excel, 题目及要求都在了~~~而且还有新老对照~~
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