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luohenqianqian · 发表于 2012-2-21 19:37:11

Some people say we should never be impolite to another person. Do you agree or disagree?

Politeness is extraordinary momentous during our communication with others. So, some people say that we should never be impolite to another person. However, I could not agree with the statement fully and will further my points from two aspects.

On one hand, in our daily life, politeness could help us make a nice impression on others. For instance, when you go to the shopping center, you may feel satisfied if you meet a polite or even enthusiastic salesgirl. Then your altitude of happiness will transfer to the next person you meet. The pleasure could just be infected. Besides, when you have some problems with others, the politeness will enable you to solve the problem easily. Last week, my grandpa could not put up with the noise made by his new neighbor, who is a young girl enjoying taking parties at home. Then he left a tip under the girl's door on which he said politely that the party is a little noisy at night. Then the girl visited my grandpa on the next day and expressed her apologize. They even became very good friends then. If my grandpa just knocked the door wildly and asked the girl to close the party immediately. The girl may be angry and they will not become friends.

However, on the other hand, the saying, never be impolite to another person, is not realistic.
There are many situations that need our impoliteness. In the sport game, like race and boxing match, you should forget about the politeness and try your best to win your opponent. Another example is about the solider in the war. If you are polite to you rival, you may lose your life. What's more, in order to survive in the society, people need to fight for his or her own interest which he or she deserved. How come if your workmate steals your ideas and tells your boss to get the credit. Are you just too polite to tell the truth and fight for your own interest? Then the next time, your idea may be stolen again.

To sum up, in our daily life, the politeness could help us win others' favor and make a problem easy to solve. However, that never be impolite to others may hurt yourself. Under some certain conditions, fighting for your own interest is necessary.

luohenqianqian · 发表于 2012-2-21 21:31:42

人呢人呢，莫沉莫沉，马上就要考啦，大家快点来理我一下

luohenqianqian · 发表于 2012-2-22 13:03:35

sigh...放弃了，我还是自己去研究满分作文吧

晨依Jacqueline · 发表于 2012-2-22 15:01:43

这一篇和写作小分队2月20号的独立写作题目类似。
楼主可以去写作小分队的大本营里面逛逛，看看大家是怎么写的。
一是多看几篇可能比单纯修改一篇获得的东西多，而且还可以注意的到大家犯的错误，也是给自己提个醒~
祝考试高分哦！

Expert123 · 发表于 2012-4-12 03:12:45

写得太烂,没药救.

luohenqianqian · 发表于 2012-4-17 15:38:32

写得太烂,没药救.

-- by 会员 Expert123 (2012/4/12 3:12:45)

CD里面居然还有这种人，真是走哪都让人添堵啊，幸好我都已经定了，不跟你一般见识

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