Ashley的写作训练

珍妮王小钰 · 发表于 2017-8-14 12:01:25

逻辑+内容摘录大D写作30分经验：

两大关键因素：1. 逻辑性 2. 内容饱和性（make your points clear）

论证 vs 素材？（personalized cases always win）中间也下足功夫

高分技巧：
1. 善用各种修辞手法，眼前一亮
2. 叙事居多，说理较少
3. 结构清晰
4. 句式多变，长短结合，善用不同词汇
5. 综合写作关键得分点把握

珍妮王小钰 · 发表于 2017-8-27 10:46:40

综合写作

珍妮王小钰 · 发表于 2017-8-27 10:54:16

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珍妮王小钰 · 发表于 2017-8-31 17:12:57

听不懂就听2,3遍然后自己说听力文本，几分钟 10分钟搞定不用写

珍妮王小钰 · 发表于 2017-9-1 10:06:38

珍妮王小钰 · 发表于 2017-9-30 20:59:36

今日任务200：.
students
1. n. 作业的同义词
作业：homework / assignments / tasks /
projects
很多：a pile of ....homework
不可数 plethora of / plenty of .....
可数numerous / abundant / plenty of +cns

2 v. 完成 finish/ complete/ accomplish

3 v. 做，处理cope with / deal with / handle /
address / tackle = do
handle tasks / homework / tasks /
pressure / problems *作业麻烦都可以

4. v. 参与
participate in / be engaged in / be
involved in / engage themselves in /
involve themselves in
They should be engaged in activities.
They should engage themselves in
activities.

5 v. 花时间/经历做....
allocate / distribute time / money /
energy to n / to doing
spend time in doing / on sth
assist sb in doing (to do 口语)
render assistance to sb （in doing）帮助某人做某事在某事

6 n. 课外活动
extracurricular activities

学生需要花时间，做作业以及参加课外活动，这使得他们没有
(sb is unavailable for sth )办法做家务。

Students should / are supposed to allocate / distribute time to
(accomplishing) assignments and participating in extracurricular
activities, which makes them unavailable for / excludes them from
/ leads to the failure of doing / makes them fail to do household
work.
....., making them / excluding ... from ... / leading to the / making
them fail to ...

7. a. (人) 忙碌的  overwhelmed / overloaded / occupied

8. a. 让人累的 overwhelming / overloading /
demanding / burdensome

9. prep. 在忙碌的生活 in such a hectic / hustling and bustling
life

在现在的忙碌生活中，大人和学生都被各种事情所压制着。
In this hectic life, adults and students are overwhelmed and
overloaded by various / diversified tasks and projects. / issues

10 n. 知识 knowledge / expertise / proficiency 专业

11 v. 传授(知识) impart / instill / cram 填鸭式/
convey

12 v. 学习(知识)acquire / obtain / attain

13 v. 巩固知识consolidate / reinforce knowledge
maintain / strengthen / enhance
relationship

14 v. 丰富知识 enrich one’s knowledge
provide sb with the access to a wide
range of knowledge

15 v. 把....应用在实践中 apply / employ ... into practice

通过实习during internship，学生能够把学到的知识应用到实践
中，并且能帮他们丰富知识，或者，能让他们学到更多的知识。
n + ving / ved 非谓语
过去时：例子
During internship, students can apply the acquired knowledge / the
knowledge acquired / acquired by them / acquired from their
instructors / instilled by their teachers / the knowledge that they
have acquired （现在） / into practice and enrich their expertise.

16 v. 让某人做某事 motivate / stimulate / urge / spur /
inspire sb to do

让学生参与讨论，能够使得学生巩固知识。
enable sb to do
Engaging students in discussion can encourage them to consolidate
and reinforce expertise.
Engaging students in discussion can provide them with the access to
a wide range of knowledge.
In discussion, a wide range of knowledge can be accessible and
approachable. by students

17 v. 让……接触…… provide sb with the access to + n/ving

18 a. 可以被接触到的 available / accessible / approachable /
reachable
encourage sb to do

网络教学使得每一个学生能够接触到，知识，以及各种各样的信
息。
A plethora of / plenty of proficiency and information can be
approachable from online education.

19 v. 不让某人做…… distract / exclude / prevent /
discourage sb from doing

20 v. 剥夺  deprive sb of ... + freedom / right

21  v. 减少...的概率 reduce / decrease the likelihood /
frequency / possibilities / risks +不好
的词of

经常运动，使得学生不生病（be susceptible from ），特别是，
减少了肥胖的可能性。
Doing exercise can distract students from illness and, in particular,
reduce the likelihood / risks of obesity.
Doing exercise, distracting students from illness, reduce the
likelihood / risks of obesity.
Doing exercise can distract students from illness, reducing the
likelihood / risks of obesity.

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珍妮王小钰 · 发表于 2017-10-10 23:10:53

珍妮王小钰 · 发表于 2017-10-10 23:36:59

句式总计
开头
1...
2 ..., in many people' s opinions,...
3 contrary to these people's opinions is my perspective that..., due to its contribution to...AT1andB

中间段
1 TS1what must be prioritized is that... / TS2 what is equally worthy discussing is that ..
2 分1initially,/ 分2first, never should we ignore the fact that
3 to be more specific,/ specifically,... 4个地方用两个就可以了
4 moreover, / additionally, it is ...that ...
5 for instance,.../ take A, 同位语， as example.
结尾段
1 ..., 同位语， will be fully achieved, as illustrated in the example of ...
2..., 同位语，will be adequately supported, as clarified in the instance of
3. In conclusion, only+ 状语+半倒装

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