OG的全划线题。求教大牛

wwc008love · 发表于 2012-1-29 16:12:05

98. Even though Clovis points, spear points with
longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have
been found all over North America, they are named for
the New Mexico site where they were fi rst discovered
in 1932.
(A) Even though Clovis points, spear points with
longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces,
have been found all over North America, they
are named for the New Mexico site where they
were fi rst discovered in 1932.
(B) Although named for the New Mexico site where
fi rst discovered in 1932, Clovis points are spear
points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto their
faces and have been found all over North
America.
(C) Named for the New Mexico site where they have
been fi rst discovered in 1932, Clovis points,
spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped
onto the faces, have been found all over North
America.
(D) Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are
chipped onto the faces, Clovis points, even
though named for the New Mexico site where
fi rst discovered in 1932, but were found all over
North America.
(E) While Clovis points are spear points whose faces
have longitudinal grooves chipped into them,
they have been found all over North America,
and named for the New Mexico site where they
have been fi rst discovered in 1932.

OG的全划线题。求教大牛，答案选A

安徽民工 · 发表于 2012-1-29 17:42:44

CE中in1932应该用一般时态，不应该用完成时态。DB中句子重心发生变化，原句强调的是虽然all over North America都有，但是还是以the New Mexico site命名，BD强调的是虽然以the New Mexico site命名，但是all over North America都有。而且D中even though---but的结构很诡异。
说实话这题我也没什么思路，纯粹根据答案去凑推理过程，望NN指导。

清飞扬 · 发表于 2012-1-29 21:26:28

(E) While Clovis points are spear points whose faces
have longitudinal grooves chipped into them,
they have been found all over North America,
and named for the New Mexico site where they
have been fi rst discovered in 1932

while的句型有2个功能：1. contrast，2.at the same time
虽然通常while句子开头表示contrast，但是在这个句子里用的没有表达出contrast的含义，因为：Clovis points are spear points xxx, they have been found all over North America xxx这是主干，吧修饰内容划区后就没有contrast表达出来

此外那个and named 也错了

they have been found all over North America,
and named for the New Mexico site where they
have been fi rst discovered in 1932----这么表达就是they ahve been xxx and (they have been) named for ....----name不是用have been 时态的

清飞扬 · 发表于 2012-1-29 21:28:12

(D) Spear points with longitudinal grooves that are
chipped onto the faces, Clovis points, even
though named for the New Mexico site where
fi rst discovered in 1932, but were found all over
North America.

这个选项句子结构有问题：noun（spear points ....), Clovis points but xxxx (把插入的even though句子划去）余下的句子结构fragment，所以不对

清飞扬 · 发表于 2012-1-29 21:29:52

(C) Named for the New Mexico site where they have
been fi rst discovered in 1932, Clovis points,
spear points of longitudinal grooves chipped
onto the faces, have been found all over North
America.----时态有问题了，where they have
been fi rst discovered in 1932，既然是in 1932就应该用过去式，不能用现在完成时

清飞扬 · 发表于 2012-1-29 21:31:54

(B) Although named for the New Mexico site where
fi rst discovered in 1932, Clovis points are spear
points of longitudinal grooves chipped onto their
faces and have been found all over North
America.

although表达contrast的意思，那么句义就必须要体现出对比
这里是although (Clovis points) nnamed for the New Mexico site, clovis points are spear poinits xxxx and have been found，没有体现出对比的句义（命名和spear points没有对比）

清飞扬 · 发表于 2012-1-29 21:33:46

(A) Even though Clovis points, spear points with
longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces,
have been found all over North America, they
are named for the New Mexico site where they
were fi rst discovered in 1932.

even though也是要体现出对比

even though Clovis points各处都有发现，他们依旧以1932年发现的地方来命名。突出一个：很多(contrast）唯一性

清飞扬 · 发表于 2012-1-29 21:34:17

OG难题不少啊！考试我肯定超过1min做，死人的

wwc008love · 发表于 2012-1-29 22:25:29

谢谢啊。。分析的那么到位，不过这样大综合的题目真的很头疼，感觉3分钟都可能做不完。
有点问题是 E选项 over north America,and named for the New....这个and应该不是和前面句子共用主语吧，逗号加and是不是应该是连接一个句子，但是原句的and后面不是一个句子。

清飞扬 · 发表于 2012-1-29 23:46:00

是的，应该是svo, and svo,或者是svo and vo 或者svo and o的结构才对

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