Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society, based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting other wild and domestic resources. ?? (B) based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the exploitation of ?? (C) and basing it on the cultivation of crops like corn and beans, harvesting fish and seafood, and the exploiting of ?? (D) and they based it on their cultivation of crops such as corn and beans, the harvest of fish and seafood, and exploiting ?? (E) and they based it on their cultivating such crops like corn and beans, their harvest of fish and shellfish, and they exploited
E. Like is the wrong word to introduce the examples; based it on their cultivating such crops … is awkward and wordy; they based is parallel to they exploited, but for this sentence to work, and would have to be inserted before their harvest of fish. and应该是接最后一个平行对象啊，为什么这里要插在第二个平行对象前面呢？
前面的问题都不管，说道这里的平行，按照E 来看，骨架是 Ｍ developed and they based it on (their cultivating sth, their harvest of sth。。。。。。 那么这里解释中说based 和 they exploited 平行， 注意我前面省略号的是they exploited 既然是they based 和 they exploited 平行，前面的括号里面的平行缺少一个and。 所以将错就错，我理解E应当改写为 M developed and they based it on ( their cultivating sth and their harvest of sth), and they exploited. 括号里为on 宾语的平行，所以需要一个and
And they based it ...引导出一个和Mochica developed 并列句，该句子结构：and ( they based it on [ their cultivating such crops like corn and beans, their harvest of fish and shellfish ] , and they exploited) 。 They based 和they exploited平行， their cultivating 和their harvest平行一起做on的宾语。 所有 their harvest 前缺少一个and
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