对于旧prep1的52,129题的笔记是：注意：in addition to A, B …，A和B不一定是同一类事物。
但是新prep1的218题中的OG10-19就这样的：
Inthis sentence, the initial clause modifies the nearest noun, identifying it asthe thing being compared with wheat.By making protein the nounmodified, choices A, C, and D illogically compare wheat with protein(是指In addition to having more protein than wheat does这个从句里面) and claim that the protein in rice has more proteinthan wheat does.
1， in addition to A, B …，A和B不一定是同一类事物。
129.(31370-!-item-!-188;#058&004475)与 旧PREP1--52
注意：in addition to A, B …，A和B不一定是同一类事物
In addition toher work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed toarchaeology through her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominidactivity and through her painstaking documentation of East African cavepaintings.
(A) MaryLeakey contributed to archaeology through her discovery of the earliest directevidence of hominid activity and through her painstaking documentation of
(B) MaryLeakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest directevidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
(C) MaryLeakey was a contributor to archaeology by discovering the earliest directevidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of
(D) MaryLeakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliestdirect evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
(E) MaryLeakey's contributions to archaeology include her discovering the earliestdirect evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of
注意：in addition to A, B …，A和B不一定是同一类事物。
longman里面"in addition tosomething"的例句给的是: In additionto his movie work, Redford is known as a champion of environmental causes.
(A) 正确，through… and through…平行。
(B) 介词结构by her discovery of…与and后面的现在分词结构painstakingly documenting不平行。
(C) 介词+现在分词结构by discovering与and后面的with+名词结构with her painstaking documentation不平行；be a contributor改变原句意思。
(D) 名词her discovery与and后面的现在分词结构painstakingly documenting不平行；名词’s contributions形式不如动词更能表达原句意思。
(E) 动名词her discovering与and后面的名词形式painstakingdocumentation不平行；名词’s contributions形式不如动词更能表达原句意思。
Inaddition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakeycontributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidenceof hominid activity and painstakingly documenting East African cavepaintings.
A. Leakeycontributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidenceof hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
B. Leakeycontributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidenceof hominid activity and by painstakingly documenting
C. Leakeywas a contributor to archaeology with her discovery of the earliestdirect evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of
D. Leakey’scontributions to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest directevidence of hominid activity and her painstaking documentation of
E. Leakey’scontributions to archaeology include her discovering the earliest directevidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation of
1. In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossilrecord 是和主句宾语相并列的，所以不要再提有关逻辑主语的问题了。
2.凡是主句宾语和“her work on theMiocene hominid fossil record ”在形式上不并列的选项都错。
3.PREP1-129相对而言稍简单，形式上并列的就只有A选项。而PREP2-66则较难，C和D形式上的并列都很好。相对而言，D选项表达的意思更加清楚。
1.In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record 是和主句宾语相并列的，所以不要再提有关逻辑主语的问题了。
2. 凡是主句宾语和“her work on the Miocenehominid fossil record ”在形式上不并列的选项都错。
3. PREP1-129相对而言稍简单，形式上并列的就只有A选项。而PREP2-66则较难，C和D形式上的并列都很好。相对而言，D选项表达的意思更加清楚。
In addition to having more protein than wheat does, the protein in rice ishigher quality than that in wheat, with more of the amino acids essentialto the human diet.
(A) the protein in rice is higherquality than that in
(B) rice has protein of higher quality than that in
(C) the protein in rice is higher in quality than it is in
(D) rice protein is higher in quality than it is in
(E) rice has a protein higher in quality than
In this sentence, the initial clause modifies the nearest noun,identifying it as the thing being compared with wheat. By making proteinthe noun modified, choices A, C, and D illogically compare wheat with protein(是指In addition tohaving more protein than wheat does这个从句里面) and claim that the protein in rice has more proteinthan wheat does. In C and D, the comparative structure higher in quality than it is in wheat absurdly suggests thatrice protein contains wheat. B, the best choice,logically compares wheat to rice by placing the noun rice immediately after theinitial clause. B also uses that torefer to protein in makingthe comparison between the proteins of rice and wheat. Choice E needseither that in or does after wheat to make a complete and logical comparison.
这个题请大家看看！究竟是OG10对，还是prep对！
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