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OG12 - 103 定语平行

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发表于 2011-12-29 17:15:28 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
103.  Yellow jackets number among the 900 or so species
of the world's social wasps, wasps living in a highly
cooperative and organized society where thev consist
almost entirely of
females—the queen and her sterile
female workers.
(A)    wasps living in a highly cooperative and
      organized society where they consist almost
      entirely of
(B)   wasps that live in a highly cooperative and
      organized society consisting almost entirely of
(C) which means they live in a highly cooperative
      and organized society, almost all
(D)   which means that their society is highly
      cooperative, organized, and it is almost entirely
(E)    living in a society that is highly cooperative,
      organized, and it consists of almost all



答案:(B)

想问(B)选项 -- wasps that live in a highly cooperativeand organized society consisting almost entirely of females
OG说三者平行,我知道三个定语都修饰到society没问题,但这种平行法倒是没见过
我想问这里的平行能不能想成 原句长这样:
wasps that live in a highly cooperative,  organized, and consisting almost entirely of females society
然后A, B, and C 平行法的C 因为太长被放到后面

我目前还没看到其他题目用这种方式来平行
有这种用法吗?有木有其他例子?
还请XDJM指教
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沙发
发表于 2011-12-29 22:30:32 | 只看该作者
103.  Yellow jackets number among the 900 or so species
of the world's social wasps, wasps living in a highly
cooperative and organized society where thev consist
almost entirely of
females—the queen and her sterile
female workers.
(A)    wasps living in a highly cooperative and
      organized society where they consist almost
      entirely of
(B)   wasps that live in a highly cooperative and
      organized society consisting almost entirely of
(C) which means they live in a highly cooperative
      and organized society, almost all
(D)   which means that their society is highly
      cooperative, organized, and it is almost entirely
(E)    living in a society that is highly cooperative,
      organized, and it consists of almost all



答案:(B)

想问(B)选项 -- wasps that live in a highly cooperativeand organized society consisting almost entirely of females
OG说三者平行,我知道三个定语都修饰到society没问题,但这种平行法倒是没见过
我想问这里的平行能不能想成 原句长这样:
wasps that live in a highly cooperative,  organized, and consisting almost entirely of females society
然后A, B, and C 平行法的C 因为太长被放到后面

我目前还没看到其他题目用这种方式来平行
有这种用法吗?有木有其他例子?
还请XDJM指教
-- by 会员 blueday5 (2011/12/29 17:15:28)



亲,这里帮你顶起,倒是从来没想过这个问题,因为大家好像都是用排除法做的语法。
板凳
发表于 2011-12-30 00:31:57 | 只看该作者
wasps that live in a highly cooperative,  organized, and consisting almost entirely of females society 这个是错的。。。
a highly cooperative society是对的,a organized society 也是对的,但是a consisting almost entirely of females society能作为一个名词使用么?consisting almost entirely of females能作为society的修饰成分么?
B选项中的consisting almost entirely of females是从句中的伴随状语成分吧。
地板
发表于 2011-12-30 02:12:44 | 只看该作者
同意瓦利哥的说法。consisting almost entirely of females是从句中的伴随状语成分。
A中they指代错误,根据原文意思,应该知道society,但是society是单数,they无法指代。
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发表于 2011-12-30 12:01:23 | 只看该作者
曼哈顿里边平行高阶那章有讲到,形容词和过去分词以及现在分词做修饰成分的时候都平行。我认为这里 consisting almost entirely of females 确实是society的定语修饰成分没有错,而不是做伴随,因为做伴随的话,逻辑主语应该是句子的主语即yellow jackets,逻辑不对,而且一般现在分词在句尾做伴随,前面都该有个逗号。。。。

纯属个人 意见,不同意请拍砖!!
6#
发表于 2011-12-30 21:30:28 | 只看该作者
曼哈顿里边平行高阶那章有讲到,形容词和过去分词以及现在分词做修饰成分的时候都平行。我认为这里 consisting almost entirely of females 确实是society的定语修饰成分没有错,而不是做伴随,因为做伴随的话,逻辑主语应该是句子的主语即yellow jackets,逻辑不对,而且一般现在分词在句尾做伴随,前面都该有个逗号。。。。

纯属个人 意见,不同意请拍砖!!
-- by 会员 jili_111 (2011/12/30 12:01:23)

你说的是对的... consisting almost entirely of females修饰society,是定语...
7#
发表于 2012-1-3 16:56:54 | 只看该作者
今天做到OG12-SC133了,正确答案是一个ing修饰的从句
8#
发表于 2012-1-3 18:18:54 | 只看该作者
曼哈顿里边平行高阶那章有讲到,形容词和过去分词以及现在分词做修饰成分的时候都平行。我认为这里 consisting almost entirely of females 确实是society的定语修饰成分没有错,而不是做伴随,因为做伴随的话,逻辑主语应该是句子的主语即yellow jackets,逻辑不对,而且一般现在分词在句尾做伴随,前面都该有个逗号。。。。

纯属个人 意见,不同意请拍砖!!
-- by 会员 jili_111 (2011/12/30 12:01:23)



 
定语后置,太长了
9#
发表于 2012-1-4 15:32:10 | 只看该作者
分词做定语

单个分词通常前置
flying birds

分词短语通常后置
birds flying in the sky  基本不太会用 flying in the sky birds
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