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Clark and Florence , a husband-and wife medical team, worked steadily and efficiently through the night, but sipping their coffee the next morning, she noticed that he seemed disoriented.>>

B sipping their coffee the next morning, he seemed to be disoriented, she noticed>>

C as they sipped their coffee the next morning, she noticed that he seemed disoriented >>

D as they were sipping their coffee the next morning, he seemed, she noticed, disoriented>>

E he seemed disoriented she noticed, sipping their coffee the next morning

    如果答案C的as前面没有句号或分号，而只是逗号，我觉得C就不能成为正确答案。理由是：as引导的是从句，如果你将as从句拿走或者放在句尾，就能清楚地看出C的问题，即将两个句子没有任何连词的用逗号连在一起，这在英文语法中，应该是不允许的。

As从句放在句尾，如下：

Clark and Florence , a husband-and wife medical team, worked steadily and efficiently through the night, she noticed that he seemed disoriented ，as they sipped their coffee the next morning。

所以，我觉得，只有A是正确选项，but是连词，后面是分词短语做定语，连词but将两个分句Clark and Florence , a husband-and wife medical team, worked steadily and efficiently through the night和she noticed that he seemed disoriented.

分开。

不可以说，我喝了你们（大家)的咖啡吗？我觉得可以阿。

就算不可以，怎么解释C的问题呢？

还请各位多发表自己的观点吆！

谢谢！

给点意见，支持，反对，只要有个说法！

别折腾这道题了，我查了一下，这是道老题，原文but是不在划线部分中的，所以选C

非常感谢 ESeraph

这样一来，c就比较完美了。否则，无论如何都难以理解的。

再次感谢！

我觉得D比C还好. D中AS从句用过去进行时, 主句用过去时,难道不比C中主从句都用过去时好吗?白勇说D改变了强调的重心, 原句中强调的是SHE NOTICED THAT,而D中强调的是HE SEEMED. 的确是改变了强调重心, but so what,原句本来就是有毛病的, 谁也没说原句强调的是she noticed,我就还必须强调she noticed. 或许原句强调的本来就不是最好的呢?

我是不是有点钻牛角尖啊?

----GMAT, 不是GRE, 精解一题, 剩过泛读十题.

up.  D is better.

Discuss...

(D)  .... he seemed, she noticed, disoriented     

it's awarkwardness , it is not clear like the sentence " she noticed that ... "