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1.觉得列提纲速度过慢，可能思维不够开阔，一时想不到好的例子。
2.打字速度过慢，龟爬。
3.过程中过于寻找好的句式，阻碍了速度
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Issue5
"Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated."
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本人习作 时间：45min 字数:475
What's the efficient way to preserve the cultural traditions(CTs)?according to the speaker,government must ensure their majour cities receive the financial support to thrive where their traditional culture are preserved and generated.as the knowledge i have known,the speaker have overstated the importance of the major cities and the financial support to CTs.
In terms of some case,i agree that major cities play a very unique role in preserving and generating CTs.we may take beijing for example where roots famous chinese CTs.beijing has become the center of the nation long long ago, therefore, it owns the invaluable CTs like opera,archetacture, as well as snacks.
Moreover,i am also agree that financial support plays valuable role when comes to culture preserving.technologies would be attracted to lead an important role in preventing the ageing of the archetectures, talents are invited to generating the cultures which would be the new milestone of the culture,both of them would heavily depend on the financial support.henceforth,the industry heavily subsidized would be sophsitcated enough to preserve and generate culture.
Nonetheless,we should take a wider perspective towards CTs, therefore,we would find that the speak have some flaws in his idea which overstated the importance of the major cities.firstly, tradition culture would emerge in every distant area of the nation as well as major cites. we may take dialects for example,there thousands of dialects in china especially in distant area like in canton in south , tibet in west, even in small towns we haven't discovered.i do believe that those dialects are quite valuable composition of chinese CTs.secondly, in some newly found nation, the major city would be to new to be the pool of the CTs, like Washington, it is just the capital city where functions superior to the CTs.
Another aspect of the speaker's flaw is his overstatement of the power of finacial support.we may find that laws and regulations would be the major concern as well, for example , we can control the number of tourists in forbidden city , which would be an efficient way to protect those old architectures.the quality of the citizen in the nation would also be an key factor in preserving and generating CTs.when the new generation have recognized the importance of their CTs, they would act as the agents to promote those cherished culture by learning and creating.the case in taiwan would be persuading. Today ,the traditional cultures are well-preserved by the promotion and preservation of the youth who have discovered and honored their CTs.
In the final analysis, the efficient way to preserve and generate cultural traditions would be determined on a case by case basis by figuring the real pool of the CTs including in the major cities and distant areas, identifying the most powerful way to support the CTs including financial support,regulation and the quality of the new generation.the overstatement of the importance of major cities and financial support would not be widely received.
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发表于 2011-10-23 12:10:49
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