Michigan Ross Essay Review Service (Limited Offer) - Fundraising 48 hours Challe

joey6 · 发表于 2011-8-30 12:18:22

Hello All Chasedream members,
Our goal is to help make your MBA wishes come true, in return for your help in fulfilling the wishes of a terminally ill child. UmichEssayServices provides a fresh, thoughtful, and quickreview (within 8 hours) of your MBA application essays in exchange for adonation to the Make-A-Wish Foundation.
We are a group of 85 first year MBA students at theUniversity of Michigan’s Ross School of Business competing in a case competitioninvolving the Make A Wish Foundation. Our challenge is to create value for the Make-a-Wish foundation ofMichigan and our solution is to offerMBA Application Essay Reviews, 1 for $10 or 3 for $25. This offer is valid at this rate for the next48 hours. (Wednesday August 31 at 4:30pm EST)

This is how it works:

Step 1: Visit the website http://bit.ly/oW1jBo and make a donation.
Step 2: Take a screenshot of thepayment confirmation page and email it to UmichEssayServices(在) gmail.com alongwith your essay(s).
Step 3: We send you aconfirmation and start the review process.
Step 4: We return your critiquedessays within 8 hours.

Our review is a high-level overview of the following:
1) Overall impression and thoughts
2) Essay structure
3) Content overview

For any questionsemail us at UmichEssayServices(在) gmail.com
Good luck with your application process and we hope to hearfrom you soon!

joey6 · 发表于 2011-8-30 12:25:04

大家好，

我们是Ross商学院的一年级学生，我们愿意为你们提供免费的Essay review，只要你愿意为这些孩子实现梦想作出贡献！请支持我们的募款计划，也请转告你身边的朋友。

请注意这是一个限时活动，截至到周三下午4：30（美国东部时间）。

若大家有疑问，也可联系我个人。可发私信，谢谢！

Joe

joey6 · 发表于 2011-8-30 12:39:16

更新：限时活动指募捐活动截至到周三下午4：30（美国东部时间）。
但是考虑到很多童鞋还没有写完Essay，Review服务可以截至到今年年底前使用！

谢谢！

sanxiangsai · 发表于 2011-8-30 21:47:24

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joey6 · 发表于 2011-8-31 02:34:11

谢谢支持！
We have students from all industries, including top IB, consulting, corporates, and also most of us have more than one offer from US top B-schools. We can help evaluate your strengths and weaknesses, find the best school fit for you and unique insights on your essay/resume writings.

bigjj · 发表于 2011-8-31 07:15:42

joey6 · 发表于 2011-8-31 09:09:31

谢谢各位童鞋支持。

请已经捐款的童鞋给我发个私信，以便我确认你的名字以及我们有MBA同学能够follow你的essay或resume，我会尽量协调中国籍同学和你follow这样方便你的进一步沟通。

tgtgz · 发表于 2011-8-31 10:26:44

所以你们section 2的所有同学会帮捐款的人改essay?

joey6 · 发表于 2011-8-31 19:56:43

顶一下，再次感谢各位的支持，我们已经收到部分童鞋的essay。我们会在接下来的时间里继续follow。同时也感谢更多无偿支持我们活动的朋友，你们的爱心一定能传递给那些小朋友！

截至Wed 8am EST，我们已经募得$7865, 超过我们的既定目标$7500. 我们的service开放时间将持续到今天下午4:30. 谢谢各位支持！

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