prep破解Q230

evelyn205205 · 发表于 2011-5-12 16:51:35

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won

C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning

D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

此题的答案是D.
为什么C不对呢？
望各路NN解释一下好么，谢谢啦~

evelyn205205 · 发表于 2011-5-12 17:47:46

自己顶一下

evelyn205205 · 发表于 2011-5-14 11:34:26

望各路NN的帮助~

evelyn205205 · 发表于 2011-5-14 13:53:00

求解释啊~

坤kun · 发表于 2011-5-14 14:07:14

the first/second...to do sth是一般的用法吧~C中用winning错了；另外in addition to翻译成除...之外，套进句子里就是她除了是第一个获奖的瑞典作家还是第一个获奖的女作家，但是原文表述的是她是第一个获奖的女作家而且还是第一个获奖的瑞典作家，意思上也有点偏差……

我也不是十分清楚的理解了这道题，不知道这样解释合不合理~open discussion

evelyn205205 · 发表于 2011-5-14 14:12:00

the first/second...to do sth是一般的用法吧~C中用winning错了；另外in addition to翻译成除...之外，套进句子里就是她除了是第一个获奖的瑞典作家还是第一个获奖的女作家，但是原文表述的是她是第一个获奖的女作家而且还是第一个获奖的瑞典作家，意思上也有点偏差……

我也不是十分清楚的理解了这道题，不知道这样解释合不合理~open discussion

-- by 会员坤kun (2011/5/14 14:07:14)

哦，我明白你的意思了。这句话我起初没有看完整，现在发现C的问题很大。
但是回过头来看A，觉得也可以接受啊。
于是我又在A和D之间徘徊犹豫了。
还请各路NN帮我答疑解惑。

evelyn205205 · 发表于 2011-5-14 17:46:59

有谁能帮帮我的么？
帮我看一下A哪里出错了。。。

Mrfish · 发表于 2011-7-27 15:32:36

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

后面一句话who....作为整个修饰语修饰novelist, 可是当去掉这一大串修饰语, 就变成 in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist. 显然不make sense, 而且这句话主要想说的是她是第一个女瑞典作家赢了诺贝尔奖, 并不是想说她是一个作家。

不过我想借LZ的L 问一下, D项and后的also是否属于wordy呢，我觉得没必要再加个also呀，而且D项的时间状语in 1909的位置我也觉得怪怪的.. 希望N人解答.

evelyn205205 · 发表于 2011-7-27 18:33:24

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

后面一句话who....作为整个修饰语修饰novelist, 可是当去掉这一大串修饰语, 就变成 in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist. 显然不make sense, 而且这句话主要想说的是她是第一个女瑞典作家赢了诺贝尔奖, 并不是想说她是一个作家。

不过我想借LZ的L 问一下, D项and后的also是否属于wordy呢，我觉得没必要再加个also呀，而且D项的时间状语in 1909的位置我也觉得怪怪的.. 希望N人解答.

-- by 会员 Mrfish (2011/7/27 15:32:36)

also在这里没有错误，起强调作用，强调她不仅作为第一位女性获得诺贝尔奖，也是第一位瑞典获得者。
至于那个时间状语，我也觉得乖乖的，但是语法并没有错误，而且眼下5个选项中，没有更好的答案了。

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