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一个句子的理解,请教NN~~

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发表于 2012-1-24 15:01:07 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States
不说别的问题,只说这里的"the rate of people consuming fatty food",到底是理解成“人们消耗多脂肪食物的速率”还是“(消耗多脂肪的)人的速率”啊?~就是不知道可不可以这样表达?求教NN~~
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沙发
发表于 2012-1-24 16:23:45 | 只看该作者
rate of = frequency or speed
(Compared to: rates for = prices)

"the rate of people consuming fatty foods" is ambiguous. You may read this phrase aloud using different punctuations and find out.

Possible meaning A: the rate of PEOPLE    (consuming fatty foods)
"the rate of people who consume fatty foods"
Here "rate" means 比率,for example 50%

Possible meaning B: the rate of  (people CONSUMING fatty foods)
"the rate at which people consume fatty foods" or "the rate of consumption of fatty foods"
this phrase refers to 人们消化脂肪的速度

I think the correct choice should resolve this ambiguity.



the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States
不说别的问题,只说这里的"the rate of people consuming fatty food",到底是理解成“人们消耗多脂肪食物的速率”还是“(消耗多脂肪的)人的速率”啊?~就是不知道可不可以这样表达?求教NN~~
-- by 会员 半阙 (2012/1/24 15:01:07)

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-1-24 23:36:18 | 只看该作者
rate of = frequency or speed
(Compared to: rates for = prices)

"the rate of people consuming fatty foods" is ambiguous. You may read this phrase aloud using different punctuations and find out.

Possible meaning A:the rate of PEOPLE    (consuming fatty foods)
"the rate of people who consume fatty foods"
Here "rate" means 比率,for example 50%

Possible meaning B: the rate of  (people CONSUMING fatty foods)
"the rate at which people consume fatty foods" or "the rate of consumption of fatty foods"
this phrase refers to 人们消化脂肪的速度

I think the correct choice should resolve this ambiguity.



the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States
不说别的问题,只说这里的"the rate of people consuming fatty food",到底是理解成“人们消耗多脂肪食物的速率”还是“(消耗多脂肪的)人的速率”啊?~就是不知道可不可以这样表达?求教NN~~
-- by 会员 半阙 (2012/1/24 15:01:07)


-- by 会员 babybearmm (2012/1/24 16:23:45)



啊~这里果真能有这两种歧义啊~~受教了~
地板
发表于 2012-1-25 04:10:42 | 只看该作者
Just come across this post... Ron did a better job than I did.
http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/although-people-in-france-consume-fatty-foods-at-a-rate-t5712.html

"of people consuming" is incorrect; you can't write "of + NOUN + VERBing" if the action of VERBing is the focus of the preposition.
see here:
post18293.html#p18293

also, the next poster is correct: choice (e) inadvertently states that "the rate of people" is consuming fatty foods.  that doesn't make any sense.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-1-25 10:22:57 | 只看该作者
Just come across this post... Ron did a better job than I did.
http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/although-people-in-france-consume-fatty-foods-at-a-rate-t5712.html

"of people consuming" is incorrect; you can't write "of + NOUN + VERBing" if the action of VERBing is the focus of the preposition.
see here:
post18293.html#p18293

also, the next poster is correct: choice (e) inadvertently states that "the rate of people" is consuming fatty foods.  that doesn't make any sense.
-- by 会员 babybearmm (2012/1/25 4:10:42)




thank you can not express myself~~~~
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发表于 2012-1-25 10:30:49 | 只看该作者
consuming ... 是用来修饰people的
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