As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A.As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B.As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C.Honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D.The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E.The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A.As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B.As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C.Honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D.The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E.The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
AB排除掉就不用说了，C 排除的原因是改变了原本是 results that A causes B 变成了 results in A causing B，原文意思以不够完整了。
C 和D 我又徘徊了好久，C 我觉得 results in the fact that 有点啰嗦了，但是 后面的 with ....结构 让我 觉得用的不太好，因为我觉得一个事件 导致另一个事件的发生，用with 来做伴随 似乎 忽略了这一点，大家有什么想法吗？欢迎讨论啊！！！
As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A.As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B.As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C.Honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D.The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E.The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
AB排除掉就不用说了，C 排除的原因是改变了原本是 results that A causes B 变成了 results in A causing B，原文意思以不够完整了。
C 和D 我又徘徊了好久，C 我觉得 results in the fact that 有点啰嗦了，但是 后面的 with ....结构 让我 觉得用的不太好，因为我觉得一个事件 导致另一个事件的发生，用with 来做伴随 似乎 忽略了这一点，大家有什么想法吗？欢迎讨论啊！！！ | 
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