prep模考时遇到的语法题求解答~~~

zz24tc · 发表于 2011-8-20 20:35:20

prep模考时最后一题
41.More than 300 rivers drain into Siberia's lake Balkal, which holds 20 percents of the world's fresh water, more than all the North American Lakes combined.(全句划线）

A.More than 300 rivers drain into Siberia's lake Balkal, which holds 20 percents of the world's fresh water, more than all the North American Great Lakes combined.

B.With 20 percents of the world's fresh water, that is more than all the North American Lakes combined, Siberia's lake Balkal has more than 300 rivers that drain into it.

C.Siberia's lake Balkal, with more than 300 rivers draining into it, it holds more of the world's fresh water than all that of the North American Lakes combined, 20 percent.

D. While more than 300 rivers drain into it, Siberia's lake Balkal holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water, which is more than all the North American Lakes combined.

E.More than all the North American Lakes combined,Siberia's lake Balkal, with more than 300 rivers draining into it, holds 20 percent of the world's fresh water.
小弟选的E，答案选A。感觉A像连写句，非常不解。请NN们帮助小弟~~再解释下E错在哪里？？谢谢大家

zz24tc · 发表于 2011-8-20 22:55:22

自己顶~~~

VampireKiller · 发表于 2011-8-21 05:45:46

选项E的错误如下:

1. 叙述重点错误. 原句强调300多条河汇聚到Siberia's lake Balkal, 而 E 强调的是Siberia's lake Balkal 拥有世界上20%的淡水.
主句都是强调部分, 从句只是修饰部分, 不能本末倒置. OG 和 GWD 上很多题都那么出.

2. More than all the North American Lakes combined 修饰的是 20 percent of the world's fresh water, 而非 Siberia's lake Balkal.
虽然中文理解起来差不多, 但是英语中语句的修饰位置很重要. 如果分隔太远, 要造成歧义.

虽然A写着像连句, 但并没有明显的语法错误, 所以不能主观地判定为错误.

zz24tc · 发表于 2011-8-21 09:12:51

谢谢LS~~~

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