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天津lbsh1990 · 发表于 2011-2-12 16:07:28

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma
Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A.Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden
, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B.She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden
, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden
, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D.A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden
, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win(D)
E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden
, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won
c 项who 指代有没有错误

毛毛carina · 发表于 2011-2-13 15:16:21

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这里的who指代没有错误，以下我复制prep08语法笔记里面的解释过来

毛毛carina · 发表于 2011-2-13 15:16:38

题目释义：A novelist who…, Selma Lagerlöf became…writer to win…
考点：
逻辑意思（logical predication）习惯用语（idiom）
分词短语与逻辑主语之间插入东西不好。
the first…to do something：“数词+不定式”，惯用法。

选项分析：
A,in 1909放在Selma前面不好，turning away的修饰对象Selma被隔远了；in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist荒谬的说SL只有在1909年才从现实主义文学成为浪漫小说家，应该是1909年成为第一夫人；and后面的多处了was使得原义变为SL是第一个女人，意思不对，应去掉was

B,She无指代，and novelist Selma使得两个分句分裂成两个人的事；turn away from…to…改为了from…and…少了“弃前取后”的逻辑关系；as well as有主次之分，分开了first woman和first Wewdish writer的平等关系，使得that仅指代了Swedish writer，使得前面became the first woman成为第一个女人，意思不对

C,the first…winning习惯用法错误；in addition的存在同样使句子含义犯了成为“第一个女人”的错误。

D,Correct；在这里如果去掉了also反而不好了，如果就X and Y，一般是用于指两个不同的人，如果有了also，一般指的是对同一个对象的两个描述，不过去掉also问题也不大；first woman和first Swedish writer必须平起平坐(凭这点就能排除A,B,C)；the first…to do sth正确用法

E,from…and错误同B；in 1909的位置不好，最好是放在becoming后面；that不能指代人。

补充说明：
who, whom只能指人，不可指物（如language，要用which指代）； which只能指物，不可指人
传统语法规定that不能用于指人，而只能用that指思想观点、动物或不具有生命的物体(植物属于不具有生命的物体)，要用whose, whose可以指人也可以指物(prep1-192)
OG11-130里面说that不能指代人，只能用who来指代。(虽然现代英语用法中that可以用于不同情形下)

Gry · 发表于 2011-5-6 20:55:35

版主太强大了，膜拜下

lavinliu · 发表于 2011-5-6 21:25:36

同意NN的解释

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