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wangshiyi1989 · 发表于 2010-11-13 10:17:44

580. Physics professors, the Arnmore Laboratories and Arnmore Research Facilities were founded by Leo and Fontove Arnmore in 1989 after ten years of fundraising.

(A) the Arnmore Laboratories and Arnmore Research Facilities were founded by Leo and Fontove Arnmore in 1989 after ten years of fundraising
(B) Leo and Fontove Arnmore founded the Arnmore Laboratories and Arnmore Research Facilities in 1989, after ten years of fundraising
(C) after ten years of fundraising, the Arnmore Laboratories and Arnmore Research Facilities were founded by Leo and Fontove Arnmore in 1989
(D) the Arnmore Laboratories and Arnmore Research Facilities were founded in 1989 by Leo and Fontove Arnmore after ten years of fundraising
(E) Leo and Fontove Arnmore founded after ten years of fundraising the Laboratories and Arnmore Research Facilities in 1989

答案是B 可是我选的是E. B
在B和E当中纠结了很久，唯一的区别是after ten years of fundraising位置不同，一个在句中，一个在句尾
不明白E为什么错，是因为没有用逗号隔开吗？

求解答~

gkast · 发表于 2010-11-13 10:22:52

动词要修饰的对像最好立即出现在动词后面。
Tom reads a book after five. Tom reads after five a book. 谁更通顺?
我没有更正确的解释。。。

wangshiyi1989 · 发表于 2010-11-13 10:40:01

其实我也觉得B更通顺点，但是又感觉after ten years of fundraising放在founded后面似乎更清楚的表达了founded的时间和状态（经历了十年的筹资）

也许是我想太多了，谢谢楼上的例子~

striveever · 发表于 2010-11-13 16:25:55

after ten years of fundraising 的改变感觉有点改变了这个状语的修饰意思这种错误在改错中常见

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