急问！下周考！which/that跳跃修饰or修饰不当的判断标准

agnesliu · 发表于 2010-7-31 22:13:18

Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering
Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber
Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886and outnumbering
Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering
Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

今天又碰到这题了，第一次做并没有觉得which有什么问题，但这次看到which跟着Dickinson我就当修饰不当给排除了，最后又返回去选了个不太合逻辑的A。
看到答案是E，我就困惑了，这里which可以跳跃修饰letters，那么到底什么情况下是跳跃修饰，什么情况下这样的跳跃又是不可接受的，算修饰不当呢？？

jixuewei · 发表于 2010-7-31 22:36:00

弱弱的说一句~~我个人认为这道题不选A是因为后面的outnumbering逻辑主语出现歧义吧。。。跳跃修饰觉得只要不引起混淆就可以了，能成为were written 主语的在之前提到的名词中只有letter 而那个人不可能做were written 的主语因此不会产生歧义~~个人感觉~~

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