关于Although的转折，用不用平行

cicijinlan · 发表于 2010-6-18 00:13:55

GWD1-Q34:

Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their
death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

A.people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States
, their
B.people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
C.fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States’s, their
D.the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the
E.the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the
答案是B。我可以明白B没有问题，但是D不是更好吗？转折的对象也是RATE，很平行。如果说有问题的话，是说D中的consumed 问题吗？可是consumed只能修饰foods啊，不是rate啊~高手请帮忙~~谢谢！

红尘道士 · 发表于 2010-6-18 11:06:11

B和D的区别是，B中consume是谓语动词，D中consume是定语，句子结构是主系表
我感觉，能够用谓语动词表达的，不要用系动词表达
1.谓语动词逻辑关系清楚
2.系动词表达，会把谓语动词变成其他结构，如本题中的定语，特别是放在主语中，会让主语更加的不简洁

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