OG12-88 有个地方，跪求NN指点啊？在线等啊

spz316 · 发表于 2010-5-10 21:52:24

88. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

(A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work both rooted
(B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer,
produced a body of work that was rooted both
(C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk,
who produced a body of work rooted
(D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk
produced a body of work that was rooted
(E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk
produced a body of work rooted both

OG上的解释
A The relative clause introduces wordiness and confusion.
B The appositive introduces wordiness and unnecessary grammatical complexity.
为什么定语从句和后置定语成累赘啊？

为什么CDE的 Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk 表达方式就好啊？

Ank · 发表于 2010-5-10 22:08:01

GMAT语法的原则是，能定语修饰就不用从句和后置定语，打个比方就是a black cat永远比a cat that is black好

OG12-88 有个地方，跪求NN指点啊？在线等啊

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