885-D-16

snow_mountain · 发表于 2004-2-16 01:41:00

885-D-    16
International    sporting    events    need    not    be    fiscal    disasters,    the    financial    success    of    the    1992    Olympic    Games    demonstrates    that    fact.
(A)    the    financial    success    of    the    1992    Olympic    Games    demonstrates    that    fact
(B)    for    example,    the    1992    Olympic    Games    were    financially    successful
(C)    like    the    financial    success    of    the    1992    Olympic    Games    demonstrates
(D)    a    fact    demonstrated    by    the    1992    Olympic    Games,    which    were    financially    successful
(E)    as    the    financial    success    of    the    1992    Olympic    Games    demonstrates

答案是E。这个没问题。我的疑问是D错在哪里？或者不好在哪里？

bigcamel · 发表于 2004-2-16 10:25:00

which(that)+be+adj是典型的不简洁的表达

snow_mountain · 发表于 2004-2-16 13:31:00

谢谢提醒。

Snazzy · 发表于 2004-2-16 14:13:00

and it's not a complete sentence

wangdaya · 发表于 2004-3-10 12:56:00

B 咧？？

wangdaya · 发表于 2004-3-16 15:41:00

E，A do sth, as B do. A和B 好像也不太工整对称啊。

ubcsong · 发表于 2004-3-16 15:45:00

D , run-on 错误？

juan · 发表于 2004-3-17 01:16:00

我觉得D从语法上讲好象没错，a fact.....是同位语，指前面那句话。只是D不如E简洁和好。

不知道我的理解对不对？请指正。

jetrong · 发表于 2004-4-12 18:16:00

我觉得D有下面几个错误：

1。使用了被动语态，应尽量使用主动。

2。逗号后面的fact没有主谓结构(我觉得是最关鍵的错误)，我记得OG上有类似的题目，我查一下!

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