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楼主
发表于 2006-7-16 17:26:00 | 只看该作者

GWD1-34

Q34:

Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

 

  1. people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their

  2. people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the

  3. fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States’s, their

  4. the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the

  5. the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the

答案是B,为什么A不对?DEATH需要特指吗

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2006-7-16 20:21:00 | 只看该作者

板凳
发表于 2006-7-16 21:27:00 | 只看该作者
我认为没有对称
应该为
Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the people in the United Sates do,
这样的表达又显然很不简洁
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2006-7-16 21:53:00 | 只看该作者
还是不怎么明白
5#
发表于 2006-7-16 22:18:00 | 只看该作者
比较对象对等
或者改成
Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the rate at which people consume fatty foods in the US(不知道哪里可以省略得简单一点)
这样更准确,我的意思就是说原句是rate和United States在比较
6#
发表于 2007-7-14 15:50:00 | 只看该作者
这个题一直看不明白,哪位大N帮着完整的分析一下?
7#
发表于 2007-7-17 00:41:00 | 只看该作者
个人认为kallyli回答正解。A的比较逻辑意思不对,at rate 不能comparable to US
8#
发表于 2007-7-17 08:58:00 | 只看该作者
kallyli回答是正确的。 补充一点是:compare to 直接放在a rate 后面而不用逗号隔开很容易引起歧义,因此最好补充逗号,并且比较对象要对等,完美形式应该是,compared to(最好用compared with) people in US.
9#
发表于 2007-9-17 16:41:00 | 只看该作者
再补充一点,their是指谁呢?到底是指people还是rate还是其他什么?指代不清
10#
发表于 2007-10-26 23:08:00 | 只看该作者

我觉得D最准确,平行结构

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