OG12-38 求教！！！！！！！！！！！！！！

jianhu8246 · 发表于 2010-8-31 20:52:40

38. In 1850, Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on
Women, arguing in a treatise for women to have equal
political and legal rights and for changes in the
married women’s property laws.
(A) arguing in a treatise for women to have equal
political and legal rights
(B) arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal
rights for women
(C) a treatise that advocates women’s equal political
and legal rights
(D) a treatise advocating women’s equal political
and legal rights
(E) a treatise that argued for equal political and
legal rights for women
Parallelism; Rhetorical construction

我就想不明白了 A B的 ARGUING IN A TREATISE 怎么就 WORDY AND IMPRECISE 了？那里就啰嗦和不准确了啊请NN给个解释啊! 像这样的类型的题目如何判断到底是怎么啰嗦了毕竟都没给出很明显的错误

sophia000 · 发表于 2010-9-1 09:20:16

因为这里可以直接用同位语，而使用arguing in 后面又加了a treatise显然比直接用同位语要wordy

angelcity · 发表于 2011-6-17 00:08:37

恩,我觉得是"published her discourse on women"后面接着又说"arguing in a treatise for women"有wordy的感觉

OG12-38 求教！！！！！！！！！！！！！！

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