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A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer’s Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man.
A. Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man B. Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison C. a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man D. a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man E. a Black American—the others being Richard Wright’s Native Son and Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man
A、C，前面说的是小说，后面others说的是人 文章重心强调的是书，破折号补充说明也应该是书B including不对，one of … , including 3本书不是同一个one of有争议说B正确，其实不然，犯了下面所说的2个错误 有争议说B正确，其实不然，犯了下面所说的2个错误 C、D、E，a Black American，the other being D，the orthers being，表达不简洁 因为E不仅平行
破折号后面接the others being是常见用法 （白勇P8）可以引出：做补充说明的句子或短语、同位语、插入语、列举的事物。
Nytimes 例子： Out of five sales advertised to be held only one resulted in a sale -- all the others being adjourned. A panel of thirty was exhausted, out of whom but five were sworn--four of the others being peremptorily challenged, and twenty-one being set aside for cause.
而且书名大多用所有格表述，且与前面一致Along with Richard Wright’s Native Son and Ralph Ellison’s The Invisible Man, publication of Jean Toomer’s creative montage Cane (1923) was a defining moment in Harlem’s era of artistic experimentation. | 
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发表于 2008-7-28 06:13:00
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