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11.8 战t 第一次写文章 不晓得怎么样 多谢大家评论啊

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发表于 2009-10-31 13:18:00 | 只看该作者

11.8 战t 第一次写文章 不晓得怎么样 多谢大家评论啊

A considerable number of people maintain the idea that the best way to travel around the world is leaded by a tour guide claim that only under the a professional guide can we understand the local culture absolutely . However ,as for me, nothing can be better than travel around the entire world by myself or with my most intimate friend

The chief reason why i generally want to travel by myself or with my most intimate friend has to do with freedom,which is a hot topic though out the society. Nowadays, the concept named "independent"have rapidly input into the mind of modern people. Since there are more factual things, people may far more enjoy the information on media such as bulletins or forums. More over, Reading the news and information on a specific tourist websites can help me enrich the knowledge for the place i want to go . In such a case , travel by myself act as a motivate to learn the certain culture of the place . 

To back up my point ,another factor also arouses people's attention is how much money you need to spend when all is said and done. The travel agency generally consist of profit-seeking entires, whose chief objective is to maximize the profit for their shareholder and other owners. they surely pay less attention on what customs feel and think .what they need to do is to dump the customs to the shopping center as much as possible.

An equally essential factor which deserve people's attention is that if you have a friend live in the city you want to go, he may becomes the most professional tour guide. It is also a sweet memory to spend your vocation time with the friend you have not seen for a long time. For a tradition chinese as me ,i would like to go to the best restaurant with my friend . We share the experiences in the past and receive the best wishes from each other .in this case , i travel the place and meet my friend at the same time.

In summary, The best way to travel is by myself or with my best friend. Tour guide definitely becomes the last option.

沙发
发表于 2009-11-1 19:44:37 | 只看该作者
我也是8号考呢
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-1 21:25:04 | 只看该作者
我写的 稀烂东西...
哎...
一起加油啊!!
地板
发表于 2009-11-2 22:33:03 | 只看该作者
看了第一句,那个maintain用得不太对,我也是以前用,然后让外教指出来的,他说要用maintain的话,前面必须出现这个人持这个opinion,然后才能说这个人maintain 这个观点,否则会让native speaker 觉得 strange.  

一点小建议,大家都在奋斗高分作文的路上阿~~
5#
 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-3 16:44:39 | 只看该作者
恩恩  多谢指教!
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发表于 2009-11-4 17:18:54 | 只看该作者
你的模板和我的好像啊,你上的也是陈克然的课??
7#
 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-7 14:32:20 | 只看该作者
缘分啊

就是 独臂打字王!
8#
发表于 2009-11-7 21:25:24 | 只看该作者
哈哈,缘分呐!希望你能考好,我也快二战了。
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-8 23:44:12 | 只看该作者
恩恩

我发了个 康康老师的11 预测机经 注意看看
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-11-10 22:22:55 | 只看该作者
加我q  1064059709 想要我发给你

那个jj 我传了好几次都传不了

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