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楼主
发表于 2009-9-15 01:25:00 | 只看该作者

[求助]prep 2-175 请进

*        175.  (30931-!-item-!-188;#058&005850)  (GWD-9-Q3)

 

Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.

A. Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people

B. As the cost of wireless service plummeted in the last year and as mobile phones became increasingly common, many people

C. In the last year, with the cost of wireless service plummeting, and mobile phones have become increasingly common, there are many people

D. With the cost of wireless service plummeting in the last year and mobile phones becoming increasingly common, many people are

E. While the cost of wireless service has plummeted in the last year and mobile phones are increasingly common, many people are

是简洁性么?

我选择的是E,答案为D,我实在觉得E挺好的,是因为简洁性,才去掉的么

沙发
发表于 2009-9-15 09:41:00 | 只看该作者
这个就是with跟while的区别了
while用来连接句子,有2个作用:
1. 表示同时,这个意思的时候,不要求结构完全平行,比如

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Industrialization and modern methods of insect control have improved the standard of living around the globe while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having gone virtually unregulated since they were developed more than 50 years ago.


        



        

(A) while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having


        

(B) while at the same time introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants that have


        

(C) while they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants at the same time, which have


        

(D) but introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants at the same time that have (B)


        

(E) but at the same time introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having


2, 引导整个从句的话,表示转折,要求平行
所以这个句子要是正确的话,后面要many people has .....

如果我的答案不清楚的话,这里面有比较好的解释

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2009-9-16 01:15:00 | 只看该作者

回复:(LemonDK)这个就是with跟while的区别了while用...

很好的资源,谢谢你,平行结构+with/which的用法,似乎明白了,在好好琢磨下~~非常感谢

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2009-9-17 00:58:00 | 只看该作者

回复:(幸福的莹莹)回复:(LemonDK)这个就是with跟...

今天想了想,这道题的考点,还是不是很清楚,顶起来~~
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发表于 2009-10-2 13:15:00 | 只看该作者

总结一下我对while的理解:

while 放在句首表示对比,有although 的意思. 两句话主语不用对应,但是意思上一定是相反的。例如OG12-60

while all states face similar industrial waste probelms, the predominant industries and the regulatory enviornement of each state obviously determint the types and amounts of waste produced, as well as the cost of diposal. 

放在句中是但是,让步的意思。但是不如but 好,(记不得是OG那个版本上说的了,while可以代表多个意思,如当...,不如but明确)。

就本句话的结构上说,while从句中的and两边都应该是,has done的时态。 这是老头们经常的考点。

D, 是独立主格作状语.with 引导的不受时态,数的限制。 要说简洁的话,还是D要简洁,看得比较清楚,不用让读者去想倒地是当,还是虽然。

6#
发表于 2009-10-4 20:17:00 | 只看该作者

in the last year这个时间状语可以做have plummeted这个现在完成时的时态的时间状语吗?

可以用这一点排除E吗?

7#
发表于 2009-10-5 12:49:00 | 只看该作者

这个要看语义把,楼上都说的对... 主要是时态的问题...

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