gwd-8-15 关于主语和谓语之间是否可以加逗号

8-15

Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.


A. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

B. Clouds form by the Sun’s warmth evaporating the water in the oceans, which rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

C. Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds.

D. The water in the oceans evaporates, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust, which forms clouds.

E. Ocean water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the atmosphere, which then condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form as clouds.

C的结构看起来是很好,但我只是怀疑C中主语ocean water evaporates 和谓语rises之间可以加逗号吗?

请NN指点,什么情况下可以在主语和谓语之间加逗号,还是什么时候都可以?

lz搞混了句子的结构,evaporates,rises, condenses平行结构修饰water；

一般主谓之间加逗号如下列形式：主语+逗号+修饰主语的部分+逗号+谓语

那末这道题C选项主语是ocean water后面的evaportates, rises, condenses是平行的谓语,也就是说主语和谓语之间没有插入修饰主语的部分,那为什么也在主语和谓语之间加了个逗号呢?

请指教

A的错误是不是rise并列的对象不明?

 Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

那C是不是有点转移句子重点之嫌呢？？