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求助 gwd11套中t-3-38关于using的插入语

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楼主
发表于 2009-4-26 16:48:00 | 只看该作者

求助 gwd11套中t-3-38关于using的插入语

(1)    T-3-Q38.
            

The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.

  1. conditions, and [CH1] in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide

  2. conditions, and they[CH2]  use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding

  3. conditions, and, in using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses,  deciding[CH3] 

  4. conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide

  5. conditions, and in their use[CH4]  the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, decide

 

A run-on

B conditions后面有一个逗号,变成了前后两个句子的并列

C 结构不清

D the best “using…”是插入成分

主要是考察插入语标点符号的正确使用
    

 [CH1]and前面”,”使得后面不知道与前面那部分并列。in多余

 [CH2]多余

 [CH3]缺少谓语

 [CH4]罗嗦,用using

我的疑问是,从来没有看见用ving做插入语的,当初排除的时候就是感觉这个ving无动作的执行者,即无逻辑主语的对应。

请教大牛,对这个问题怎么看?

沙发
发表于 2009-4-26 16:51:00 | 只看该作者

应该不能完全说它是插入语

using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, the executives decide....这是正确的补法!

板凳
发表于 2009-4-27 01:29:00 | 只看该作者
using是修decides
executives decide on a strategy by using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses.
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