GWD-TN-12-39

Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing.

1. Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing.[C1] 

2. Nearly 99 percent of five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth have vanished.[C2] 

3. Vanished are nearly 99percent of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth.[C3] 

4. Of five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them have vanished.[C4] 

5. Of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent have vanished.[C5] 

A 缺少连词

B of 后面要有the 因为是特指

C are vanished 错 vanish是不及物动词 不存在被动语态

D 少定冠词the